disappointed if this the last chapter. kinda feel like it is though.... this isnt yuri, this is super-clingy-friendship-closeness

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Not bad teenagers been teenagers honestly I was really stupid too and noting really bad happened so I enjoyed it.

The author had all the right elements to end this chapter nicely.....but SHE/HE RUINED IT BY SLAPPING US WITH A "JK BEST FRIENDS FOR LIFE"

But anyways, eh chapter is eh.

Interesting... it really feels like it needs a third part to wrap everything up tho. If it doesn't have a third part in fact then this story will just forever feel unfinished to me, which would be a shame.

Symbiosis. How nice.

so, this it? I was happy this came out, I thought the first one was going to end like that...so there another one or is this the end game really?

You wont understand this chapeter until u'l have the same wierd experience :v

Yess now I can feel. The. Yuri in. The air kind off ? not like the. Last one. Need more cuz the ending sucks ...

The ending is like fliping middle finger to "coming of age" theme and still can living happily ever after.
yep,I like it.

What? I was hoping for a good ending, it wasn't bad but it didn't have the love I was looking forward to :(

The way I'm reading this, is that they don't have the enough maturity to deal with this new emotions but thanks to the trust they have on each other to talk about it they give a step on the right direction to understand these emotions. True, it could be clearer but teenagers are like that, heck, I'm sure all of use lived a situation similar to theirs at some point on our life.

Meh... This sequel needs another sequel..?
Somehow things haven't changed at all...
It somewhat still a runabout..

This one doesn't settle well with me. This is a codependent nearly obsessive relationship and those are not healthy. Sure they're teenagers and are coming to some sort of terms with their growing feelings for one another, but unlike what Nao says that she's not a kid anymore, they're acting like little kids. The dark haired girl getting angry, selifish, and possessive, upset that Nao isn't as dependent on her as before, and then having Nao continue to be overly dependent on the other girl. It's getting mad just to get someone's attention.

Both of them are going to have to change a fair amount to make anything work. Nothing can start otherwise.

Well ... do not think a final, they talk about and everything, but it was kind of gibberish because none of them has really changed. I hope this has another chapter about them

Slighty better than prequel than before i guess??? :/

Meh, had so much potential. So disappointing. The point and pace still remain same.

Smh.

Behold; the recipe for an unhealthy relationship that will end in disaster.

It came across as a very immature ending.

That's really surprising for a story about highschool girls, hmmm...

That ending did not solve anything? ..or am i missing something?.

Why the need to change anything? They just realised once again who they were for each other and decided to get along with it, despite it being "unhealthy" for whatever reason. I don't see Nao suffering much from it, she was pretty happy to get called back by Chitose. It's the kind of cute dedication. You could always imagine that from there, they could start to emancipate from each other in a few months/years - certainly not in a matter of weeks or days.

And even then, I don't see why in a story everything should be healthy and harmonious. Stories about broken people can be interesting as well. Heck, I'll even say stories about broken people are probably the most interesting.

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It's kinda cute. Slow character development but what can you expect from two chapters? I don't see anything wrong from the reasoning of both. They are teenagers. You don't expect a Mahatma Gandhi's kind of philosophical life view. But the mainstream of raw human emotions are there. They just knew each other so much that they knew what each other wants. Like Nao doesn't like going with others but only with Chitose. Is that monopoly or toxic? No. Chitose has other close friend. Nao has basketball which she excels and not much of a mingler since childhood. Is it wrong? No. That is her personality. She matured pretty much by that personality, so, why change it?If anything in this story that is very solid, they complement each other.

What a cute master and slave relationship!

But what wait chatacter development? Huh?

nope sweetie, people change and thats a fact

People really need to stop throwing the word 'codependent' around like some condemnation. They're kids, they don't really understand whether they and their relationship is changing in an environment that definitely is.