To anyone who reads too much into this...

...don't read too much into it. It's mochi.

Mochi is arguably the greatest philosopher of our era.

To be fair she let herself get persuaded way too easily. It's her own fault.
I still would have liked the twist that her friend knew how the potion worked and was pining for this result from the start.

Please tell me this has a continuation.

Lol that turned out well? I guess.

Disrobed her in one maneuver. C'est bon.

They ended being together owo

Please tell me this has a continuation.

Knowing Mochi, there will be a few more chapters, then she's gonna get bored with it and leave it be. Like almost all of her stories, besides Yuri Natsu maybe.

UGH this is the worst kind... So rapey it's disgusting.

How many parallel series will mochi begin before she says "Maybe I should finish one of my series already"?

100/10 plot
Also, I only know Mochi for less than a year, but I never expected her to draw nipples.

"She keeps crying stop, yet she's not resisting at all. I can rub her boobs all I want!"

"You won't refuse right? You can't right? After all you're in love with me, aren't you?"

I know Mochi didn't mean it like that, but god does it sound wrong and disgusting.

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... well, if it was meant to demonstrate how horrifying a Love Potion could be, it worked well. Because obviously the Potion overwrites all resistance, even if she somehow is still aware that what's happening is wrong.

How many parallel series will mochi begin before she says "Maybe I should finish one of my series already"?

Maybe it's just my take on them, but most seem to be the type where they can be finished anywhere. If it ends like this, I'd say it's a full story with a bit of an open end. If it continues, that's fine too. Most of their work seem to be like this.

and then we find its not a real love potion

100/10 plot
Also, I only know Mochi for less than a year, but I never expected her to draw nipples.

Yeah, even Stan was weirded out by this unpercedented move, especially since Mochi censored nipples before (look at the Yuri Natsu chapter where Saki got spooked by a bug in the hot spring).

"She keeps crying stop, yet she's not resisting at all. I can rub her boobs all I want!"

"You won't refuse right? You can't right? After all you're in love with me, aren't you?"

I know Mochi didn't mean it like that, but god does it sound wrong and disgusting.

Do note how she immediately backed off and started apologizing once she noticed the streaming tears and (mis)interpreted them as an indication of hating the groping.

Okay then.
It was actually pretty funny, except for the rapey feels. Good thing, that they didn't really cross any line in the end, like this.

Is this really Mochi's work? This doesn't really look like her usual artstyle, especially with the overly expressive faces. The writing also seems a bit off, as her characters tend to have a distinct dead-pan that I'm kinda missing here. And when did Mochi ever draw NSFW? This smells fishy.

There's something a bit unsettling about this

You know, I really love Mochi but drugging someone then taking advantage of them is a little well...

"Maybe I will forget about senpai"? MAYBE?

Take responsibility, you useless lesbian!!

(I want next a chapter were they discover that the drug was never working!)

It's a reference to La Celestina...

they put this in the waters to make the frog gay

It's the chemtrails!

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Just yes.

its like, beta not into yuri. i think i actually originally read this before the other one

At least Kaori realized she went too far, so she still has some conscience left. Maybe she just wanted to tease her and test the drug's effect, but got too much into it and didn't realize that she was committing SA.

Or I'm being stupid by reading too much into a funny story

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