I liked how the MC came to finish what she came for and wasn't able to do in highschool. At least, she won't be dealing with the "what ifs" in the future. Regardless, the MC knew that it will be unrequited, still, she got her closure as she said.
Very good. Seemed to move a little too fast which is probably hard to manage with one shots and that one line of course I was rejected bugs me. Felt like it should have bee said a little differently but overall very nice.
I see what the author was going for, but I think the two of them getting to know and like each other was much too vague. So the feelings at the end really don't have much substance.
Yeah I agree, maybe if this one shot had been split up into 2 parts and the author would've worked it out a bit more it would've come out better.
Very good. Seemed to move a little too fast which is probably hard to manage with one shots and that one line of course I was rejected bugs me. Felt like it should have bee said a little differently but overall very nice.
I don't know... She knew the other girl was already taken so she expected to be rejected. I thought the line made sense...
I liked it. It was sweet and I felt you could see the interest growing between the two of them as it progressed.
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