I'll try to keep this updated with new pages in future updates.

That last page, it amazes me she forgot about her for two days.

I didn't get the Charlotte/Hibiki/ Kasumi part. And art reminded me Kishi Torajirou ...because of lips.

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This is precisely what I was going to post.

Oh god my heart goes out to Mirei T^T she's so loyal and deserves all the love

I hope Mirei finally get he recognition she deserves.

There are still more to this, right?. It's kinda not satisfying if they end it there

And art reminded me Kishi Torajirou ...because of lips.

Yeah, that's what I felt too lol

Didn't get all the hate towards Mamori in the anime, I just wished she was more affectionate towards Mirei. And then this doujin decides to amp up the lack of attention towards Mirei...great.

There are still more to this, right?. It's kinda not satisfying if they end it there

It is ongoing yes, although due to the format I'm not sure how to upload new pages. Best bet at the moment might be to update the release with new pages and bump it.

Really? Mamori went into her house for a few hours then completely forgot about Mirei for two days? I know Mamori's a klutz but this is just absurd

I'm really not cool with Kasumi cheating on Hibiki like that

I'm really not cool with Kasumi cheating on Hibiki like that

Cheating? It was a threesome that Hibiki arranged.

Cheating? It was a threesome that Hibiki arranged.

Really? In what panel was Hibiki involved? The dialogue made it sound like the purpose was to set Kasumi up with Charlotte for sex. That's also what the tags indicate. Now I'm not making any moral judgments mind you, but I definitely would expect Kasumi to turn down an arrangement like that, especially if her partner is doing it because she feels her GF is paying excessive attention to someone else

EDIT: Actually I kinda see what you're saying, I still find it a little sad

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It's kind of an awkward relationship, but it seems to have worked out for the best.

BTW I updated the chapter with a cleaned up version of the morning after page. http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/valkyrie_drive_aftermath#13

I didn't get the Charlotte/Hibiki/ Kasumi part.

It was pretty odd for me. Seems like a pretty flimsy/ contrived reason to have a threesome.

This doujin is hilarious and the art is really, really good (helps the author is actually an animator by trade) Shame Akira is only name dropped and doesn't actually shows up.

As for the odd characterizations, there are two reasons for that: rule of funny and the author preferences. She admitted to not being really fond of neither Hibiki or Mamori.

As for the odd characterizations, there are two reasons for that: rule of funny and the author preferences. She admitted to not being really fond of neither Hibiki or Mamori.

Ah, I see; that explains the doujin. I was wondering if I was missing some extra material (like a manga or something) that gave characterization to Hibiki that wasn't shown in the anime.

I'm really not cool with Kasumi cheating on Hibiki like that

I disliked the whole "Hibiki forcing Kasumi to sleep with annoying bitch" -plot. Why can't we ever have normal Kasumi x Hibiki?

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This doujin is hilarious and the art is really, really good (helps the author is actually an animator by trade) Shame Akira is only name dropped and doesn't actually shows up.

As for the odd characterizations, there are two reasons for that: rule of funny and the author preferences. She admitted to not being really fond of neither Hibiki or Mamori.

I kinda thought that the author wasn't a fan of Hibiki by the way how easygoing she was with Charlotte just fucking her girl like it was nothing and now that you're mentioning it, its clear that the author isn't a fan Mamori ending up Mirei either, by the way she was turn into an idiot forgetful bitch. I mean, if her intention was to make the people that read her doujin hate Mamori, i'm on that hate train already.

I don't think she loathes Mamori but she did mention the doujin would go the MireMamoMomo route. And Hibiki was also pushing for a threesome end with Charlotte, so yeah.

^ I don't think she loathes her either, but she's definitely trying to get people to dislike her.

Hibiki felt like a completely different character, so i guess she was just trying to make her different from the anime.

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Best bet at the moment might be to update the release with new pages and bump it.

Does bumping get the update notified on the RSS? Because that's how I know there's something new in DR.

Gonna admit it... I ship CharlotteXKasumi, even is she is cuter with Hibiki

Best bet at the moment might be to update the release with new pages and bump it.

Does bumping get the update notified on the RSS? Because that's how I know there's something new in DR.

That is the main problem, in that it doesn't afaik. Will probably have to think about this.