Wow chap. 5, way to completely overshadow the main couple with a past couple.
Dont understand - Is there a main couple when its been a new couple every chapter more or less?
Also how are they 'overshadowing' the 'main' (first?) couple any more than any other chapter when no other couples are in it? And what does 'past couple' mean? none of these have been in the story before, and its not set in the past.
Dont understand.
If by main couple you meant the 2 co-pilots mentioned in the title- since its their first meeting and nothing happens except 'nice to meet you' id hardly call them a couple. And the pilots arnt a 'past' couple- they are a current new couple.
On another note -
Is the top half of page 26 meant to be black like that?
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