Brainless porn... meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh. Why are good artist doing such poor jobs?

i swear the pairing of love live is so messed up...

hmm that escalated quickly... im laughing at the weirdly drawn boobs.

last edited at Jun 14, 2016 12:05AM

Why does this feel like wife swapping?

Hey they we're on the lovers thing.
Not really my taste

Also, why do most girls don't wear a bra in an doujin or manga. Seriously, so they don't need that worthless time, to strip the bra of so they can bang?..

last edited at Jun 14, 2016 1:13PM

Hey they we're on the lovers thing.
Not really my taste

Also, why do most girls don't wear a bra in an doujin or manga. Seriously, so they don't need that worthless time, to strip the bra of so they can bang?..

Eh? I often get annoyed because so many girls in yuri don't take their bra off at all when having sex. It happens quite a lot, and it always looks kind of uncomfortable

last edited at Jun 14, 2016 2:10PM

Good art, rest was meh.

I agree that the story wasn't that great / felt rushed - but the art was good! Mostly! The pic of Nico on page 20 has hugely exaggerated boobs - though quite modest, for the totally flat Nico-chan they are WAY too big.

I like the art but I don't like the story.

Baloon tits had me goin "wtf?"

Waki_Miki has it right tho, total wife swapping :p

This pairing isn't my cup of tea.

I love me some Eri/Umi stuff but this doujin sucked.

The artwork was the absolute worst, the artist rarely diverged from the usual slightly turned face and they all looked the same. Perspectives were fucked and the anatomy was terrible at times. Same facial expressions and the characters looked incredibly stiff. Had to stop myself from reading because of the cliché and boring writing. Overall, if you enjoyed it and the art, good for you but I hated it. Just had to express my thoughts :^[

last edited at Jun 14, 2016 7:12PM

If you're reading a h-doujin and expecting a substantial plot or realistic anatomy, you're probably not the author's target audience.

I thought it was fine tbh

love eir & umi couple is together

If you're reading a h-doujin and expecting a substantial plot or realistic anatomy, you're probably not the author's target audience.

I thought it was fine tbh

but the thing was, along with the gravity defying bubble breasts with nipples pointed strrrrrrrraight forward, the sex was really bland. I would sacrifice anatomy for some creative, hot sex, but this one didn't really have either.

If you're reading a h-doujin and expecting a substantial plot or realistic anatomy, you're probably not the author's target audience.

I thought it was fine tbh

That's fair and true. Just wish the artwork was better since that's all it has going for it. I guess the porn too but I don't care much for that either since I only read partway through it for the ship.

I liked the art, but everything else was kind of lacking. The drawing of Maki at the end was fantastic.

Damn I was so excited to see Eri x Umi and sex tag in one line but its just porn :( My heart is crushed

' ' kinda... dissapointed.

Lewdness aside, the art is gorgeous.

I agree that neither the plot nor the art were any good but it was Eri x Umi that doesn't end sad/ambiguous so its ok in my book.
Still I hadn't favorited it weren't it for the tarot card which is by far the best thing in here.

last edited at Jun 15, 2016 3:25PM

The author had a very good Nozomi x Maki DJ one too.

Updated with a improved scanlation.

I think the intention was to fap, not to be enamoured by the amazing plot and fantastic character development so for what it was worth, it was nice.

The author had a very good Nozomi x Maki DJ one too.

Yas.