SeifukuGirls posted:

"I meant to wipe the sweat off her neck but I licked it instead," is about as realistic as, "I tripped and my dick fell in her vagina."

Well she did wipe it off. Just with her tongue.

ummmmmm... all that does is swap sweat for spittle. oh sure, at some pôint it air drys, but liquid for liquid is still liquid.

ciega posted:

ummmmmm... all that does is swap sweat for spittle. oh sure, at some pôint it air drys, but liquid for liquid is still liquid.

It's still no longer sweat, lol.

ciega posted:

ummmmmm... all that does is swap sweat for spittle. oh sure, at some pôint it air drys, but liquid for liquid is still liquid.

It's still no longer sweat, lol.

lol. i guess yer right.

i still have to chuckle to myself when i think about all the imagery from both the story and this thread. visions of a panting, slobbering dog keeps popping into my head. now when i reread this story, i think about how an untrained puppy would behave where one minute it bounces around following its owner and the next minute it growls and nips at the owner for being cruel to it.

last edited at Dec 29, 2015 12:06PM

wow

Damn it. I thought for sure this would have a part 2. . . Eventually ...

you guys are looking at this in a very negative way. The way I see this ending wasn't as "bad" or "horrible" but an opened ended ending. We dont know that after what happened there the next day they were gonna prob meet or talk about it lol.

last edited at Apr 29, 2016 11:15PM

Wow, rereading this after some time made me realise that this is low key Her Pet by Pito
Very similar plot elements

last edited at Apr 30, 2016 3:07AM

No -A-
I wanna forget this one. It makes me sad

good stuff, I forgot about this one, I wish there was more from this author

you guys are looking at this in a very negative way. The way I see this ending wasn't as "bad" or "horrible" but an opened ended ending. We dont know that after what happened there the next day they were gonna prob meet or talk about it lol.

I never see the point in whining over breakups in highschool romance stories. 100% of schoolgirls (and 110% of schoolboys) are idiots. Kids fall in and out of love twice a day at that age. (except Kase and Yamada of course, thats the real deal)

this is strange, it starts in the most unrealistic way, but the ending is the only realistic one possible

Only know you love her when you let her go...... more truthful words have never been spoken..

Let it not be said tha the MC is fickle. She keeps blasé until the bitter end.

I'm not sure what just happened.
But it feels incomplete.

Mango logic at its finest, the girl who is in love with you walks out of the room after you reject her, you immediately realise you do actually love her back, but instead of, you know, getting off the bed and actually closing that 5 meters distance that currently separates you, you turn into a crying ball of angst. Has the main character never opened a door in her life or what? I do not get it, what is stopping her?

last edited at May 2, 2018 7:01PM

^Agree

serves u right