B-bunnies die when they feel lonely, th-that's why I decided to translate this instead of studying for my finals...

last edited at Jun 10, 2015 11:20AM

Yeah, so, why isn't this just weird porn? This is clearly out of place in regards to the other Gochuumon doujins. I rate 0/10 arm sized dildos.

But I actually liked it. I'd call that study time well spent.

On page 14 in the second bubble of the first panel there's an additional 'change' that is unnecessary.
And on page 19 the third to last bubble "that's" is spelled tha'ts.

Otherwise I enjoyed it :]

So adorable, I like that Chino got excited and moved her ears when Cocoa entered the room. My favorite lesbo tsundere.

On page 14 in the second bubble of the first panel there's an additional 'change' that is unnecessary.
And on page 19 the third to last bubble "that's" is spelled tha'ts.

It's been fixed now, thanks for pointing it out.
I swear I go over my releases. But the derp is too strong with me...（・□・；）
I need to find someone to proofread my stuff.

last edited at Jun 10, 2015 12:26PM

Lol thanx for translating! All the bunnies lived! Yay!
I liked this, it felt like the show... u know the pure cuteness paired with subtext the author did a good job ^_^

It's been fixed now, thanks for pointing it out.
I swear I go over my releases. But the derp is too strong with me...（・□・；）
I need to find someone to proofread my stuff.

OrangePekoe resists the urge to volunteer

It's been fixed now, thanks for pointing it out.
I swear I go over my releases. But the derp is too strong with me...（・□・；）
I need to find someone to proofread my stuff.

OrangePekoe resists the urge to volunteer

OrangePekoe pls (◕‿◕✿)

Mmmh, that was cute, but the pacing is kind of messed up, in my opinion, especially in the first part. Kinda feels like it's missing some panels or something. :/

Well, still a nice read, but was a bit confusing.

Acute cocoa sickness ..more like "A-Cute" cocoa sickness.

On page 14 in the second bubble of the first panel there's an additional 'change' that is unnecessary.
And on page 19 the third to last bubble "that's" is spelled tha'ts.

It's been fixed now, thanks for pointing it out.
I swear I go over my releases. But the derp is too strong with me...（・□・；）
I need to find someone to proofread my stuff.

dont worry, its always the obvious stuff, in a physics exam i used 1 instead of the 1K that the problem gave me.

GAAAAAAAAAAY oh right this is a doujin not part of the anthology.

@Nosebleed: You also missed a line behind the "w" here, do you use the lasso/marquee tool when you edit? because I've noticed those kind of lines in some of your releases, anyway thanks for the hard work as usual. resists urge to volunteer for editing no I'm not just copying OrangePekoe, I've been resisting the urge for a while evidence im not BSing

GAAAAAAAAAAY oh right this is a doujin not part of the anthology.

@Nosebleed: You also missed a line behind the "w" here, do you use the lasso/marquee tool when you edit? because I've noticed those kind of lines in some of your releases, anyway thanks for the hard work as usual. resists urge to volunteer for editing no I'm not just copying OrangePekoe, I've been resisting the urge for a while evidence im not BSing

Not gonna lie, I looked at the page for a good 10 mins before I found that.
I don't typically use the lasso tool, I think what I should do first is clean and then typeset over the clean scans but I tend to do everything at the same time and then things like that slip by me.
Also, I tend to do these things in the spur of the moment, usually several hours straight late at night, so at one point my eyes are just giving out and quality control becomes more lax.
As for extra words, that's what happens when I'm writing the sentence and then realize I could word it better but forget to delete some part of the previous sentence. :P
Well none of it should be an excuse for simple mistakes like this, but despite knowing all that, I often still derp.
I think my problem is trying to do it all in one go.

Well there's your answer I guess and convince someone to proofread for you or don't work if you're tired ...I don't volunteer for that because my grammar/spelling skills have gone downhill since last year(I'm still good finding details just...not words).