Only thing I don't like is the "not taking no for an answer". Too many people think rape can't happen in relationships already, we don't need this to be evocative of that situation too.
ii loved this part in the manga <3 <3 <3 , ii wish'd they went all the way ..
ii have a feel'n that maybe grace got hurt so that Mel would have to take care of her lke Mel takes care of Lynn .. thats how am seen'n things ..