Yujacha
joined Nov 15, 2016
I was about to get so mad because there's a bunch of TL issues, like:
- The missing side text of Mari saying "I did use a curling iron today, heh heh..." in the second panel of page 2
- More missing side text on page 2, this time of Mari going "Dia~ Chikacchi~ Buon giorno!!", Chika saying "Mari-chan!" in response, and Dia going "You're so hyper even in the morning."
- Page 3 should be "IT'S A 4 NOW" rather than just "4".
- All the side text on page 4 missing: top panels had Mari going "Hi~", "Buon giorno~", "Heeeey~"; fifth panel has Mari going "If you're the one inviting me, of course I'll go<3" and Kanan replying with "Yeah...I'll make you dinner..."
- Might be me being nitpicky, but the "I've never been more serious in my life" line on page 4 is more like "I'm not playing around right now...!"
- Most of what Mari says in page 5 about Kanan vanishing/being replaced/getting hurt...where in the world did that come from? All Mari says is: "I dream that you disappear all of a sudden...then I'll wake up, drenched head to toe in a cold sweat... On those days, I don't stop feeling uneasy until I see you running towards me with a 'I'm right here!' and a big ol' hug..." That's what leads to Mari saying that she'll return the favor and give Kanan a big ol' hug in the morning.
- Page 8's "A little sus, isn't it?" is a veeeeery liberal interpretation of the actual line, "What dream?"
- Me reading the credits page: wait what, didn't Pito release this comic in January? wtf does Among Us have to do with anything, Pito's gotten into writing horror/mystery-style comics lately...
Then I realized what date this translation was published. :')
I still have issues with all the missing side text, though. Any plans to upload a corrected version?
