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Dark_Tzitzimine
67763073_p3
joined Dec 18, 2013

found this
http://nhentai.net/g/118947/

Oh boy, I hope it gets translated eventually

joined Feb 22, 2015

I actually created an account just to comment about this doujin.

So I read the raws up till the end and I can say something about the ending.

It's a happy ending (kind of). Moe ends up with Ran after Ran realized that the dorm mother never really loved her, and it was Moe that could make her actually happy. There was also a back story about the basement, which turns out to be some kind of sex-ed class so the students don't get shocked by the real world when they graduated. The means might be rough but in the end everyone is actually happy and Moe became the new dorm mother with Ran being the new school chairman. There is some forced sex done though, but the one being raped doesn't seems to mind about it in the end

I understand this might not be for everyone, but I'm personally happy that Mira is trying new things.

67763073_p3
joined Dec 18, 2013

I actually created an account just to comment about this doujin.

So I read the raws up till the end and I can say something about the ending.

It's a happy ending (kind of). Moe ends up with Ran after Ran realized that the dorm mother never really loved her, and it was Moe that could make her actually happy. There was also a back story about the basement, which turns out to be some kind of sex-ed class so the students don't get shocked by the real world when they graduated. The means might be rough but in the end everyone is actually happy and Moe became the new dorm mother with Ran being the new school chairman. There is some forced sex done though, but the one being raped doesn't seems to mind about it in the end

I understand this might not be for everyone, but I'm personally happy that Mira is trying new things.

That actually sounds pretty good.

How many chapters are in total?

Z%20ss
joined Oct 15, 2013

Wtf this is the first time I notice this series...
Orgy
Oh, thats why, that tag is on my blacklist. Not the kind of porn I like.

Moe ends up with Ran after Ran realized that the dorm mother never really loved her, and it was Moe that could make her actually happy.

So, basically "The sea, you, and the sun" again?

There was also a back story about the basement, which turns out to be some kind of sex-ed class so the students don't get shocked by the real world when they graduated.

When there is more plot in a porn manga where the plot is... typically bad porn plot... I'd rather see the mangaka focus more on the porn side by having more pages dedicated to it. This is my problem with most of Mira's works. Too much bad plot, too little porn.

Anyways, I don't find orgies arousing so I'll just let this sink into my blacklist.

joined Feb 22, 2015

How many chapters are in total?

4 chapters in total, spanning 2 books.

So, basically "The sea, you, and the sun" again?

Now that I've re-read bits of that, it's quite similar. This one just has more SM elements and darker atmosphere I guess.

When there is more plot in a porn manga where the plot is... typically bad porn plot... I'd rather see the mangaka focus more on the porn side by having more pages dedicated to it. This is my problem with most of Mira's works. Too much bad plot, too little porn.

And here I thought that Mira is actually one of the more explicit yuri mangaka. I mean the doujinshi is laden with porn scene IMO, the back story I mentioned is about 2-3 pages in length. Now I'm curious, could you recommend some yuri manga that you find arousing?

Billportrait
joined Jan 17, 2014


I love this shot, I highly doubt it will go that route but in a much better written story that would be the point where it was no-more-innocent-Moe and she would gradually start becoming more and more aggresive ultimately becoming the queen bee of the dungeeon

last edited at Mar 7, 2015 11:39AM

OriginalGengar
Kira%202
joined Nov 29, 2014


I love this shot, I highly doubt it will go that route but in a much better written story that would be the point where it was no-more-innocent-Moe and she would gradually start becoming more and more aggresive ultimately becoming the queen bee of the dungeeon

The way I understand it, that's pretty much what's going to happen. I took a look at the raws and Moe was totally queen beeing it up.

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joined Apr 27, 2014

:O ahhhh, I wanna read it all,now that I know about the raws,also that School Girls Love Selection ... I think I like Mira's work :)

joined Mar 25, 2015

Can you guys tell me where to read the raw please....

08f6612130a20845a480034c0567fbe1d8926209_hq
joined Apr 27, 2014


I love this shot, I highly doubt it will go that route but in a much better written story that would be the point where it was no-more-innocent-Moe and she would gradually start becoming more and more aggresive ultimately becoming the queen bee of the dungeeon

The way I understand it, that's pretty much what's going to happen. I took a look at the raws and Moe was totally queen beeing it up.

I re-read it, yeah that girl is gonna be awesome, I hope she steals Ran from eh that dorm mother woman.. Ryouko? cos she doesn't love her u__u

OriginalGengar
Kira%202
joined Nov 29, 2014


I love this shot, I highly doubt it will go that route but in a much better written story that would be the point where it was no-more-innocent-Moe and she would gradually start becoming more and more aggresive ultimately becoming the queen bee of the dungeeon

The way I understand it, that's pretty much what's going to happen. I took a look at the raws and Moe was totally queen beeing it up.

I re-read it, yeah that girl is gonna be awesome, I hope she steals Ran from eh that dorm mother woman.. Ryouko? cos she doesn't love her u__u

Exactly that, basically.

08f6612130a20845a480034c0567fbe1d8926209_hq
joined Apr 27, 2014


I love this shot, I highly doubt it will go that route but in a much better written story that would be the point where it was no-more-innocent-Moe and she would gradually start becoming more and more aggresive ultimately becoming the queen bee of the dungeeon

The way I understand it, that's pretty much what's going to happen. I took a look at the raws and Moe was totally queen beeing it up.

I re-read it, yeah that girl is gonna be awesome, I hope she steals Ran from eh that dorm mother woman.. Ryouko? cos she doesn't love her u__u

Exactly that, basically.

Ahhh, I had missed some black,also cool image you have there hehehe

joined Apr 3, 2015

guys can anyone tell me where i can find the raws please... i´ve been looking but i cant find them T-T

joined Apr 3, 2015

I actually created an account just to comment about this doujin.

So I read the raws up till the end and I can say something about the ending.

It's a happy ending (kind of). Moe ends up with Ran after Ran realized that the dorm mother never really loved her, and it was Moe that could make her actually happy. There was also a back story about the basement, which turns out to be some kind of sex-ed class so the students don't get shocked by the real world when they graduated. The means might be rough but in the end everyone is actually happy and Moe became the new dorm mother with Ran being the new school chairman. There is some forced sex done though, but the one being raped doesn't seems to mind about it in the end

I understand this might not be for everyone, but I'm personally happy that Mira is trying new things.

hii... could yoy tell me where i can find the raws please... i cant find them >w<

joined Dec 4, 2013

It was hard for me to read it but it was also something new to me(I'm happy that Mira made that manga) looking forward to your update

joined Jul 22, 2014

Yesss! Moe becoming the boss! I find it quite cool seeing a younger first year dominating everyone, what she did with the first year is quite a good start. To be honest I quite dislike the older years apart from Ayane since they give this negative vibe with a case of I'm superior to you in their words and body language.

last edited at May 22, 2015 9:17PM

91
joined Jun 19, 2014

I actually created an account just to comment about this doujin.

So I read the raws up till the end and I can say something about the ending.

It's a happy ending (kind of). Moe ends up with Ran after Ran realized that the dorm mother never really loved her, and it was Moe that could make her actually happy. There was also a back story about the basement, which turns out to be some kind of sex-ed class so the students don't get shocked by the real world when they graduated. The means might be rough but in the end everyone is actually happy and Moe became the new dorm mother with Ran being the new school chairman. There is some forced sex done though, but the one being raped doesn't seems to mind about it in the end

I understand this might not be for everyone, but I'm personally happy that Mira is trying new things.

may i have the link to the raws ?

Kumirei%20(2)
joined Jun 6, 2014

I think the deal with Mira is that people who categorize doujins and what not into a binary "porn" and "not porn" have issue with it because it sits right in an awkward gray area. There is plenty of story but it also has some intensely hot and well-done sex scenes that are...well meant for people to get off too.

The big issue is that some of her stuff (Earth Girls) is far more plot and others (this and her oneshots) are far more porn.

This one I'm interested in because I see Moe starting to veer down a path where she doesn't care about herself anymore. I think I know what will happen...I'm just curious as to how we get there.

Anime-anime-boy-black-and-white-boy-favim.com-1570867
joined May 7, 2014

Oh my god I thought I was waiting this forever

Minun_resize
joined May 16, 2011

ch.3 is too good for me!

joined Jul 8, 2013

OH! For a second I thought that Chapter 3 was the ending. I mean, this series is already everything I don't like put into one thing but this chapter of the ending would've just...Well I think we can all agree that chapter 3 would've been an incredibly shitty ending and not just me, who doesn't like the orgy aspect. Also, I read the spoiler that someone posted and I really only have one question at this point: Really? Ayane will do NOTHING in this series? Really thought she was gonna become the surprise love interest but...I guess not...? lol
In all seriousness though, series like this where the orgies significantly overshadow and outnumber any plot (not saying that there is none, just not that much) are basically the reason why everybody thinks yuri is all porn. Honestly, I love Mira. But I don't love this orgy after orgy after orgy after orgy series. But i'm gonna keep reading since Mira has yet to let me down with her endings (a thing I can't really say for most yuri manga cough TAKEMIYA JIN cough lol). Even though, I didn't love what I read in that spoiler posted a while ago, just gonna hold on hope that that person explained it poory lol.

Love.live!.600.1492198
joined Sep 4, 2014

Chapter 3, yeah... I think that Moe's character changed too quickly, even though it's a hentai series.

Toffee%20copy%202
joined Jan 2, 2014

ehhh this isn't too bad its just that I prefer mira's more vanilla stuff

Dark_Tzitzimine
67763073_p3
joined Dec 18, 2013

Chapter 3, yeah... I think that Moe's character changed too quickly, even though it's a hentai series.

See it like this, is the lesbian porn equivalent of training montages.

joined Jan 17, 2014

remind me of yugi oh series, when retard turn to badass with a toy lol

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