Girl on the left couldnt be sat like that with the other girls legs crossed how they are- her hips would be higher and kinda twisted- you'd probably even see a bit of her raised left leg going over silver girls right one..
^ I hope you realize none of these artists see your critiques. You’re better off making a pixiv/twitter account and directly commenting on their art instead of arbitrarily ranking every drawing here
@Clueless1 - It's about time to stop this bullshit. Nobody fucking cares, and you look like the internet version of the schizophrenic on the street talking to himself.
...are we sure they're not just acting with the kisses and stuff? Since you know, they're all avatars and we can't actually see what they're doing or if they're even in the same room.
Did Tomoe mentioned that she has a piercing there? I've seen some other fanart of her with the piercing being in the same location. (sry I recently got into them so I'm a noob)