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Roomie
joined Mar 9, 2014

I'm sorry, I don't see Korra/Asami at all x)

1092452381_f
joined Sep 12, 2014

It isn't rape if it's yuri.

God bless Ooshima Tomo!

Jackavi
joined Feb 23, 2014

I guess i have to adjust my Yuri Googles. Can't seem to see the Kim Possible x Sheego ship properly. But definitely I feel the Korra x Asami ship (screw Mako!) and Marceline x PB (my fav's FP but it seems my yuri radar can't find a match for her yet. I guess there's Fionna but Finn's such an asshole so NO).

Finn isn't really an asshole, just an idiot, i forgive the kid cause he is growing and all, though i will admit that most of my interest in adventure time comes from PB and Marceline.

Kigo is a ship that is oozing with subtext based on how obsessed with Kim shego is, the pet names and semi-flirting also help, what really sealed the deal was the episode where shego became "good" and got really close with kim and then was about to tell her something before ron jumped in like an idiot and made her "evil" again.
Also the fact that ron is kinda a terrible boyfriend and they were just good friends until the prom episode forced sudden romantic tension down our throats.
Honestly the only fanart i see of KP anymore is kigo fanart, that ship is keeping that show alive and there are two kigo fanfics that in a lot of peoples eyes have been accepted as headcanon.
The main draw is probably the foe yay! in it, my fav fanfics are always the ones that remember their personalities clash a lot sometimes.

Korra and Asami are basically canon, the writers approve, korras VA said she likes it, all the moments they had are just awesome and mako being married to his job has made him a much more fleshed out character imo.

last edited at Dec 17, 2014 1:33PM

Nezchan Moderator
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joined Jun 28, 2012

It isn't rape if it's yuri.

God bless Ooshima Tomo!

Preeeeety sure yuri has nothing to do with it.

1092452381_f
joined Sep 12, 2014

The last page xD "I want to become a robot who draws nothing but NicoMaki for all eternity!" I wish it too.

Preeeeety sure yuri has nothing to do with it.

sigh

last edited at Dec 17, 2014 1:52PM

machigai kouhai Uploader
Wympw_yh
NHFH Scanlations
joined Sep 10, 2014

tfw i point out to you guys that this could be prequel to crystal candy

Image
joined Aug 20, 2014

I can't believe I'm saying this, but I feel this would have been a lot better if the author got rid of the gratuitous sex and replaced it with something else.

Anime
joined Oct 20, 2014

This is so Ecchi, for which reason I've uploaded an ecchi tag. It's rape or borderline rape. Clearly. When you flip through the pages you can't get your mind off it. It haunts you until the very last final page.

Art
joined Jan 31, 2013

tfw i point out to you guys that this could be prequel to crystal candy

This confirms my suspicion, though I don't remember the title of that story since it's longer than 5 syllables, I remember it as "machine gun something".

Yurifaceapproved3%20copy
joined Sep 10, 2014

Really good.
About people having the feeling that it's a bit rapey...
Well, from my perspective, it simply looks like a little sexy game between a tsundere and a girl knowing that she is :)

last edited at Dec 18, 2014 9:06AM

65752315_p1
joined May 1, 2014

I like aggressive Maki from Ooshima's works e_e but this was a bit weird, love the art as always. I support Ooshima becoming a robot :D I hope she make more non-porn, or at least porn with more plot xD

Jackavi
joined Feb 23, 2014

I'm sorry, I don't see Korra/Asami at all x)

HAH!
Canon city here we come!

Roomie
joined Mar 9, 2014

I'm sorry, I don't see Korra/Asami at all x)

HAH!
Canon city here we come!

Must be because I didn't watch the third season yet V_V

Makiko
joined May 1, 2014

Kigo is a ship that is oozing with subtext based on how obsessed with Kim shego is, the pet names and semi-flirting also help, what really sealed the deal was the episode where shego became "good" and got really close with kim and then was about to tell her something before ron jumped in like an idiot and made her "evil" again.
Also the fact that ron is kinda a terrible boyfriend and they were just good friends until the prom episode forced sudden romantic tension down our throats.
Honestly the only fanart i see of KP anymore is kigo fanart, that ship is keeping that show alive and there are two kigo fanfics that in a lot of peoples eyes have been accepted as headcanon.
The main draw is probably the foe yay! in it, my fav fanfics are always the ones that remember their personalities clash a lot sometimes.

Korra and Asami are basically canon, the writers approve, korras VA said she likes it, all the moments they had are just awesome and mako being married to his job has made him a much more fleshed out character imo.

I guess haven't watched that many episodes of KP. well KP's peak were during my high school. And yeah. My Yuri google aren't working at that time yet. Plus I'm more hooked with my online games Now I'm going to look into it. Just hoping that there are online streams for KP though

Well. I'm kinda biased in not forgiving Finn. Yup. Being too much on FP's side. It got too much feels for me when Finn acted as a jerk in broking FP's pure lovely heart. I was kinda "you deserve it" on that episode where FP became FQ.

Really? I thought they were just teasing. Haha! but with the FINALE out. Definitely a canon!
But, yeah. Korra's not much of the "avatar" for me. I'm actually quite more annoyed to her. don't hate me I can go fangirling about Asami though. XD well, except on what happened in the finale. Definitely going fangirling right now!!! yeah. I just finished watching it!

I'm sorry, I don't see Korra/Asami at all x)

HAH!
Canon city here we come!

Must be because I didn't watch the third season yet V_V

You must definitely go in Season 4!!! Especially when Major spoiler ahead. Seriously. suddenly Korra gone missing and she's only keeping in touch with Asami!!! And after that, you don't even need your goggles anymore! Most specially the FINALE!!! Gawd!!! Korra and Asami were eloping to the Spirit World!!! HOLDING HANDS!!!
Augh... Better keep myself restraint. Too much fangirling already.

last edited at Dec 19, 2014 11:46AM

joined Jul 26, 2014

It isn't rape if it's yuri.

God bless Ooshima Tomo!

This is truth.

41218900_p20-crop
joined Oct 26, 2014

You are not the only one. It was definitely rapey. Maki's line "you invited me in so I can have my way with you" made me cringe. While Nico may have subconsciously wanted it, and may gave her consent at the end, it seems to me that she only did that because well... there's no thing else she could do already, so may as well just go with the flow.

Maybe I'm just thinking to much since this is porn... but I still prefer it to be consensual. That's why I don't like Ooshima's Maki, who seems to be horny 24/7 and just wants to get into her gf's pants no matter Nico's discomfort.

Nevertheless, Crystal Sugar and Machine Gun is still a wonderful read though. A little cliche, yes, but it gives a very nice and plausible depiction of the girls' lives in the future given their background. Ooshima's comment about Nico's mom is also quite on point and interesting. I think Ooshima is totally capable of capturing the character, it's just... she chooses to make porn.

Hope we can see some serious stuff from her in the future. We're definitely in no lack of NicoMaki porn though.

lol finally i found people that thinks Ooshima's maki is horny every time 24/7
but omg ooshima-sensei is a girl??? askdasncnsdankjvlkjNSDKLALVAKJLVNKADS hwo do you know

actually i would love if ooshima-sensei making non-porn DJ with more plot and fluffy things. idk if i can describe all her doujin in one word it will be: p0rn. like, you know.

I can't believe I'm saying this, but I feel this would have been a lot better if the author got rid of the gratuitous sex and replaced it with something else.

with fluffy things please.

sorry for my poor english :")

last edited at Dec 21, 2014 2:23PM

Coollogo_com_262501472
joined Jul 21, 2014

I see where Maki gets her good looks: her mom. It wasn't to bad just caught me off guard like Citrus..was a bit aggressive and dived right in

joined Aug 23, 2014

OMG the story kind of in my bad side but i can't resist it :( Maki eyes just draw me in,only looking at the cover and i'm doomed, oh Maki your eyes , OOshima really draw the best Maki's eyes, the best Maki expression

ChocolateCakeLover
Gigi7
joined Feb 4, 2015

You're not supposed to feel bad just because no one has commented on a work for a while.

Unless you are.

In which case I must have built up much aggressive expansion... I expect a coalition to form soon.

last edited at May 3, 2015 4:37PM

joined Jul 6, 2019

So in the future Nico will say she's in love with Maki when they see each other again and achieved their dreams and get married to each other....

joined Jul 6, 2019

I wish we could see a story of Maki and Nico getting married and on their honeymoon it would be amazing

Bldrnner
joined Mar 3, 2019

awesomeness
perfection

Areyougonnatouchem-17sq
joined Jan 27, 2019

Hmm.

This feels like it's trying to do at least two, maybe three different things at once. You've got the standard NicoMaki two-tsunderes-bouncing-off-each-other thing, you've got the whole "we have to pursue our separate dreams but once we achieve them we'll be real lovers (someday)!" thing that Japanese school romance seems to thrive on, and you've got the genuinely damaging "(some) women don't know what they really want is sex with you so your job is to force them into realizing it" bit. It's really kind of a mess.

But— this has moments I truly love. The exchange where they're both being real about the aspects of each other that they hate, and the flashbacks that show how hollow each of them is behind her persona — finger kiss perfection. We're often most frustrated at those traits in others that we have ourselves, and there's a strong current of self-loathing in both of them, under all the layers of pretension and anger at the world.

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joined Jan 11, 2019

Awsl

joined Oct 25, 2010

What a difference in this story! But, I know that they love each other very much. They in love with each other for an eternity. So, in spite of their words, their
feelings for each other remain clear and strong!

last edited at Dec 15, 2023 8:27PM

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