I like how well written and in character both were. The hand holding was so close! That set up needs to be used more. Freaking the sexual tension made me flush.
Seriously. 300 pages of straight out hardcore porn were way too much. My brain actually overloaded to the point that it can't register anything but the 5 safe pages now.
Seriously. 300 pages of straight out hardcore porn were way too much. My brain actually overloaded to the point that it can't register anything but the 5 safe pages now.
safe pages? You don't remember the "kyaaaa Aahh d-don't put it there... so deep..... HNNNNGGG like this ahh...ahh is like we're connected aah" not to mention that their finger tips touched!
"Sullen" on page 5 is a mistranslation: "muttsuri" does literally mean "sullen", but in Japanese slang it's almost exclusively used as a shorthand for "muttsuri sukebe" i.e. "closet pervert".