This to me has an unrealistic ending. That Nakajima girl never came to terms about dating a girl and all of a sudden while sober (being drunk would have made more sense), she hops in the bed naked with the girl???
I don't see the problem. I mean, people move and different paces. Just because one person might not do it that way, I don't see how you can say no one else ever would.
Nakajima says she wishes the Kimura was a boy but I don't see how you can say exactly how much of a barrier that was for her in terms of pursuing a relationship. She even continues to hang out with Kimura after being kissed. We also learn that Nakajima is the one "always all over" Kimura.
I also believe that moment at the end is a deception of a real life thing. Strong, over reactions in regard to the safety of a romantic interest. Always kinda bugged me honestly but I'm betting there is some truth to them.
I've heard of guys realizing they wanted to marry their girlfriends until someone starts hitting on them not knowing the girls are taken.
My old boss said he got with his wife when the broke up after a few dates. She was with someone else. He realized he wanted to be with her so he told the other guy to leave and they've been together since.
I have no trouble believing the last moment, Kimura coming to Najamia's defense(even though she wasn't, you know. in danger) is basically as strong as any love confession. Maybe more so since it may seem more primal. Possibly a real turn on too.
I love this piece. It's so frank.