Too damn short. There’s no slide in morality, it all happened too quickly. The PTSD artwork was a good start (the blackened hands) but failed to show the degradation in self, academics, and social life. This work is a piece of shit.

I liked it honestly. It's short, to the point, tragic, beautiful and it demonstrates well how horribly your entire life can change in a single moment.

Seriously though, that's not what nonplussed means
Yeah was thinking the same

Also her flashback felt like a monologue when it started, but she was narrating it to someone?

Seriously though, that's not what nonplussed means
Yeah was thinking the same

Also her flashback felt like a monologue when it started, but she was narrating it to someone?

Yeah, was she talking to her friend and explaining everything? That’s what I was hoping for.

Well, that lived up to the Depressing as fuck tag. I think I need a hug.

Damn, saw the author & got excited, then saw 'het' 'rape' and almost didn't bother. Sure enough...

it ain't as depressing as goblin slayer ep 1

DISAPPOINTED !!

Im sad
:(

Meh to short to have a meaningful impact

To the ones checking the comments section because of the tags (and don't mind spoilers) and those who don't really get the story, the story is basically about a girl who made a promised to kiss her friend, but got raped and then avoided the promise because she believes she's dirty. Then she tried to wash away the experience of the rape by normalizing it by having sex as a call girl, which she believes will make her clean again so that she can fulfill her promise. But she haven't met her friend in while since she dropped out of school to be a call girl, and one day they finally met and she broke in tears after seeing her "angel".

I read it once and thought of it as a mess. After re-reading to try to understand the story, it's still a mess that I just understand better.

......................................

Seriously though, that's not what nonplussed means
Yeah was thinking the same

Also her flashback felt like a monologue when it started, but she was narrating it to someone?

Yeah, was she talking to her friend and explaining everything? That’s what I was hoping for.

She was talking to her client. (It's he who asks and comments on pages 7 and 8, too.)

I'm a bit confused by the last page; not sure what it's supposed to mean.

Lame. That's all I can use to describe this... Well okay, other words like infantile and inane come to mind as well. But lame suits this one just fine.

Oh, F.
I lost my words

:'(

Why is there reality in my escapism?

Why is there reality in my escapism?

seriously?
that's so sad

The ending isn't as sad as people think, she's basically in the mindset that she is filthy, but that she hasn't ended it all. Because of the girl.

At least that's how I read it.

Someone needs to tell her it's ok to be a prostitute

Meh. Like the others have said, this would have had more impact if it was longer. Meh. At least this made me want to reread A World Without Freedom.

A painful lesson on how toxic the whole concept of "purity" is.

Truest thing ever been said

Jesus. In other news, did you know that 10/10 rapists are pieces of shit?

You heard it wrong. It's ∞/10

Too damn short. There’s no slide in morality, it all happened too quickly. The PTSD artwork was a good start (the blackened hands) but failed to show the degradation in self, academics, and social life. This work is a piece of shit.

And the explanation is also a piece of shiet. You are telling me the MC got raped, then descend to hell just like that? Where's her family, where's her friends, where's the authorities? Her parents can't be a dick to forget about her daughter's existence, can they?

The only thing this oneshot has is the feel. And because of poor execution, the feel's gone. I'm heading to Itou Hachi's page.

last edited at Oct 24, 2018 5:07AM

URGH

should've trust the tag

i feel dirty after reading this :(
send angel plz

ah shit

well, that's one of the many awful things rape could do to someone's mentality.