Iwami Shouko

Hey, it's the artist for Kaname-whoa!

Its great and the those two make a great couple.

It's always funny seeing a mangaka who only did original, SFW stuff doing a hentai doujin. But again, it shows you just how vast otaku culture is within anime/manga. You really can never assume just what the extent a person's dealings with that side of things are until you see their porn.

I submitted this sooner today, after having just read it in another site. I'm surprised it's here already. lol

I honestly prefer Akira x Ichika and Aoi x Himari, but the doujin was still good. XD

Also, maybe I should watch Kanamemo one day. I only ever watched some gifs.

Yukari is such a freaking beauty in this

I really enjoyed this :)

I've not started watching this season yet - the sweets theme for it seemed kinda lame and like it wouldn't turn out to be a classic season.. though I WILL check it out at some point.

I noticed there was a typo in panel 1 on page 19 and also - what's the bit on page 21? -
'You're going there from the bat!?' Is the wording a bit off or is this some saying I have never heard. I can guess it's meaning, like 'from the tee-off' - but it seems wrong because bat does not signify 'from the start'?

last edited at Apr 7, 2018 6:53AM

Straight from the bat is a legit terms. Also who the heck uses golf terminology in yuri (assuming there's a distinct lack of golf-themed yuri currently available)?

Straight from the bat is a legit terms. Also who the heck uses golf terminology in yuri (assuming there's a distinct lack of golf-themed yuri currently available)?

I'll be honest, I've never heard "straight from the bat". The usual way to word that is "straight off the bat".

Straight from the bat is a legit terms. Also who the heck uses golf terminology in yuri (assuming there's a distinct lack of golf-themed yuri currently available)?

I'll be honest, I've never heard "straight from the bat". The usual way to word that is "straight off the bat".

Yeah, it sounds like a weird combination of "right off the bat" and "straight from the get-go."

I really enjoyed this :)

I've not started watching this season yet - the sweets theme for it seemed kinda lame and like it wouldn't turn out to be a classic season.. though I WILL at check it out at some point.

I noticed there was a typo in panel 1 on page 19 and also - what's the bit on page 21? -
'You're going there from the bat!?' Is the wording a bit off or is this some saying I have never heard. I can guess it's meaning, like 'from the tee-off' - but it seems wrong because bat does not signify 'from the start'?

Yeah, I noticed that too. I didn't relate it to "off the bat" though, and I never heard "from the tee-off" (maybe because I'm not from an English-speaking country and usually learn more common terms?).

Also, the middle panel in page 28 makes it look like Ichika is speaking Yukari's line, and I have no idea who is replying. lol

Edit: And just for the record, I would've submitted it earlier but I wanted to read it first and I ended up postponing because I found out it had been translated (I had already seen it untranslated on nhentai, which is also where I got the translated version from) at a time when I couldn't go read it. xD

Edit 2: BTW, this was my first PreCure series. I plan to watch from the start eventually but haven't had the time yet.

last edited at Apr 6, 2018 3:39PM

On Page 12 the book covers have "Sweets Note 1" on them ...twice.
It's actually supposed to be 7 and 8.

last edited at Apr 6, 2018 4:05PM

I'm just imagining Yukari stealth masturbating out of sight the whole time. (Kinda like this.)

minor errors were fixed https://exhentai.org/g/1210007/53183b6f9a/

On Page 12 the book covers have "Sweets Note 1" on them ...twice.
It's actually supposed to be 7 and 8.

Oh, nice... It's slightly less wrong now.

https://i.imgur.com/aOnUgRS.jpg

last edited at Jun 15, 2018 9:04AM