june-monkey posted:

i mean... i kinda liked it. i dunno, maybe it was the body horror lol

Personally I found it a lot more interesting than horrifying. Uziga Waita has far more horrifying stuff so it turned out far better than I was expecting. Though the gory aspects bother me a lot less than they might other people. I enjoy reading stuff like Franken Fran and Junji Itou's mangas when they're both very body horror-filled.

i feel like i'm not understanding correctly this

anyway, it wasnt that bad

Feels like some psychological thing

Hmmm...
This is fairly decent from Uziga.

I kept looking away and covering my tablet and grimacing, mainly cus it was visually horrifying, but being in the living room with my family wondering around didn't help
Im glad I got to the last page tho

Also it's a damn shame there isn't any other amputee yuri on this site.

There is http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/our_future#2 but after a brief look at it again not sure if it's amputee or if she's just born that way.

Guro needs to take a lesson from Gease Howard AND DIE FOREVER

yukito posted:

Guro needs to take a lesson from Gease Howard AND DIE FOREVER

You do realize that if you have a problem with it nobody is forcing you to read it, right?

yukito posted:

Guro needs to take a lesson from Gease Howard AND DIE FOREVER

You do realize that if you have a problem with it nobody is forcing you to read it, right?

You do realize that for some people, it's about pushing their beliefs onto others rather than living their own lives according to them?

Amputee Guro Tragedy Violence

Koveras posted:

You do realize that for some people, it's about pushing their beliefs onto others rather than living their own lives according to them?

Well those people should learn to stop being moronic. If it doesn't harm anyone then what's honestly the problem with someone liking something you don't?

What the f*ck...
I mean I thought I was prepared and all when I saw the warnings and tags, I guess I wasn't. :p

Also it's a damn shame there isn't any other amputee yuri on this site.

There is http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/our_future#2 but after a brief look at it again not sure if it's amputee or if she's just born that way.

Wow that one was really sadddd! ;_; it's a shame most amputee stories always have dysfunctional and abusive relationships huh. But I get it. Thanks for the suggestion.

I didn't quite get the ending but that sure was interesting.

I was afraid the gore would be realistic, but I'm glad I managed to read it until the end. Wow, I didn't expect the gore to be that...much. Franken Fran feels lighter than this, but that's just me. I've just eaten lunch...but I'm alright. Thankfully, it is a surreal one, which is my cup of tea. Nice symbolism.

As a surreal writer, this actually encourages me to write full-blown gory imagery, which I usually avoid because reasons.

Thank you for bringing this here. Is there anything similar to this?

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Clover0Project posted:

I was afraid the gore would be realistic, but I'm glad I managed to read it until the end. Wow, I didn't expect the gore to be that...much. Franken Fran feels lighter than this, but that's just me.

Uziga Waita is one of the most well known guro mangakas so it being gorier than Franken Fran isn't all that surprising. Also Franken Fran, while very gory in general, is more a morbid comedy than anything anyways.

Uziga Waita is one of the most well known guro mangakas so it being gorier than Franken Fran isn't all that surprising. Also Franken Fran, while very gory in general, is more a morbid comedy than anything anyways.

Interesting. You're right, Franken Fran is morbid comedy (which is why I love it)...perhaps I'll take a look at Uziga's other works when I can.

My head hurts trying to connect what just happened to some meaningful explanation.

that was a weird way of saying she died, oh well the feels got to me anyway

I'll try to explain what happened, or at least what I think happened, well Sae was in the hospital and she was dying, and Yuki went to visit her, but I think she was ignored and Sae and refused to have her visit her until Sae was dying then she let her visit her which was when Sae turned into a monster and hurt Yuki, which I think the author is trying to show that Sae dying enormously hurt Yuki, to the point it feels like she was being attack by her. Then at the end I think that's where it shows Sae was a normal girl who died in a hospital that had a lover, who was deeply hurt by her death

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Ok... WTF

Not my proudest fap tbh

Nice metaphor... I agree that sadpanda's got a nice summary. Though I've got a different interpretation of the monster, I admired the depth of his/her interpretation...

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Edit1: To Arckuno et al, thank you for uploading and the works...

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Edit2: The monster for me is Death. Gofu-tokuku is an idea that we seek and seek only to acquire suffering. I wanted to get beyond that and be at peace. What Sae is referring to IMO is life or happiness or dreams or the likes ... The second sentence suggests that she already accepted that she will die but was afraid to be cast into oblivion completely. Somebody mentioned in here that there was no bones. Yes. Since Death can't bring that including the memories left behind. In a sense, no one really dies since we all live in the memories of the people we loved. I remembered this story I read before.

Life and Death were talking....
Life: Why are people afraid of you, try hard to avoid you? Doesn't think of you that much and even not talk about you? While they cling onto me... even seek immortality...
Death: Aaah Life.. my Life, you are... You are a beautiful LIE and I am... a painful TRUTH.

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Well that was interesting~

Probably the best summary of the symbolism from sadpanda:
"Sae is bedridden into a hospital. Her amputations are symbolism for her worsening health.
Yuki is the only one that visits her. Sae tries to rationalize her worsening condition and inevitable death by feigning apathy.
Yuki's offhand remarks that she doesn't need to come see her crumbles Sae, as she realizes despite wanting to dampen her emotions Yuki means the world to her. ( Also, the whole exchange in Pg. 12)
The suffering Yuki goes through, and being ripped apart by the monster, is essentially her emotions being ripped apart by Sae's condition. Sae apologizes to Yuki for dragging her to her side, because it must feel burdensome to deal with a dying person.
Pg. 18, Yuki tells Sae she doesn't mind the pain because she mutually loves Sae.
Sae dies, Yuki is alive."

Huh, from the way Yuki behaved, seemed like it was all Sae's delusion to me.

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This is the whole conversation, it might be useful for those who don't want to see the gore and stuff.

S: Come in
Y: Aha... you could tell easy, Sae-chan.

S: Yeah, the only one who visits me is Yuki-chan, right?
S: But I'm fine with that. I don't want to see anyone from class.
Y: Sae-chan...

S: Yuki-chan is my one and only friend, isn't that right?
Y: Yeah, but everyone else is your friend too, right?

S: Yuki-chan... pull back my sheet.
Y: ...okay.

S: You're not surprised by my body, huh?
Y: Well.. yeah.

S: Wanna try touching?
Y: S-sure.

Y: It's all smooth...
S: Even though you were looking lower, you went for the shoulder.

*Another day

S: Yuki-chan, look. How is it? This time "there's nothing bellow my stomach", what do you think I should lose next?

Y: Sae-chan... did you do that yourself?
S: Yep, without surgery or anything. I just got rid of it on my own

Y: Why.. would you do something like that?
S: Cast away to become complete. Do you understand what that means? Because humans covet things like money and whatnot they suffer.
S: I dont have anything I'm good at to begin with, I don't have any friends or hobbies. I don't even have anything in this room.
S: I have nothing to be dissatisfied with. So if I try getting rid of my body, how happy could I become? I decided to try that out.

Y: Do you really not need anything?
S: I don't.
Y: Then... I don't have to come anymore?
Y: Wait, Sae-chan? Sae-chan! Sae-chan!

Y: (On that day, sae-chan stayed rolled up like that)

*Another day

Y: Sae-chan, Sae-chan... I'm sorry, lets make up. I'm sorry, I wasn't serious about what I said yesterday.
Y: See? I came again today. I wanted to see you.

S: Really?
Y: It's the truth, Sae-chan.

S: I said cast away to become complete, but I knew that having nothing wasn't happiness.
S: Since Yuki-chan was here for me, I was awful for saying that.

S: If Yuki-chan is here, I don't need anything.
Y: Th-thank you...

S: It's fine if I have at least one thing to cherish right?

*Now without clothes

Y: This is a bit embarassing.
S: You've seen me naked body, haven't you?
Y: That's true, but...
Y: (Huh? Is this.. I wonder if Sae-chan is trying to eat me... it will probably be painful)

S: Gufutokuku is the idea that we seek and seek only to adquire suffering. (budist?)
S: I wanted to get beyond that and be at peace... it was no good.

S: I'm not that strong, I wanted Yuki-chan. If I throw away everything but you, I will be happy.
S: Yuki-chan.

S: I'm sorry. It hurts, right Yuki-chan? But it's all right, I will cover you up.
Y: (It's warm... the pain is going away)

S: Shall we become one?
Y: (Become one.. with me)

Y: Hah, hah kahah and etc.
S: I'm sorry, it hurts right? You hate me now, don't you...

Y: Sae-chan... I'm not angry at all. You're just clinging onto me, right? So... don't be afraid.
Y: Hey Sae-chan... will you... ehehe this is a bit embarassing. Say, will you... kiss me?

S: Yu... Yuki-chan... I'm sorry! I'm sorry. I didn't want to... I just-
Y: It's okay... I just wanted to. That's all.

Y: (I'll see you again someday, Sae-chan. At that time, let's talk until we're sick of it.)

*Dead.

Well I tried something interesting, I coppied the whole conversation, try reading it without seeing the background and you can see the story for what it really is!! It's just two girls who are in love with each other, and the conversation in the part when she "eats" her sound like a normal conversation they would have if they were having sex.

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