Looking at the last page, it turns out this doujin is relatively new! That makes me happy, since it means that even though it's been so many years since Nanoha first came out, people are still doing yuri doujins for it.
I'm not saying it's bad, I was actually surprised at how good parts of it were. It is inconsistent, however, like when they didn't translate "Lyrical" or used "2015 Anfang des Sommers" instead "Frühsommer 2015"...
Well, of course the warmth of that hand is real, Einhart. Oh god, I made myself sad. See, Claus never got to feel the warmth of Olive's hands -- 'cos she didn't have any.