The light brushing of lips got me... Sometimes, reading something so pure (the two kids) will ease my mind... Combination of naughtiness and pureness hit me precisely in the heart...
The Japanese word used consistently throughout, the running theme for the chapter, means flavor or taste and can also mean experience. So I stuck with the English flavor, which also means a quality characteristic of something. In this case, a quality characteristic of an adult kiss.
Minor suggestion:
File 046, lower-right, the hair blower sfx "ゴ～" -> "roar" or "vroooom"? I think the former one is a bit scary for a household appliance - perhaps it ought to be broken to give such noise.
The Japanese word used consistently throughout, the running theme for the chapter, means flavor or taste and can also mean experience. So I stuck with the English flavor, which also means a quality characteristic of something. In this case, a quality characteristic of an adult kiss.
I was more making an oral sex joke by comparing it to a french kiss. but im guessing that in the actual language it makes comparisons of the taste of chocolate to the taste of her girlfriend?
Minor suggestion:
File 046, lower-right, the hair blower sfx "ゴ～" -> "roar" or "vroooom"? I think the former one is a bit scary for a household appliance - perhaps it ought to be broken to give such noise.
Ah, that made me laugh... Not really checking it... but whatevs... a hair blower that roars... I'd wanna see that... LOL
Anyways, chappy 3 is too much... the pureness level is still there but the naughtiness is slowly increasing... Not that i;m complaining... I'm not that pure either... the 'onee-sans' sure are very understanding... Lol..
Minor suggestion:
File 046, lower-right, the hair blower sfx "ゴ～" -> "roar" or "vroooom"? I think the former one is a bit scary for a household appliance - perhaps it ought to be broken to give such noise.
The Lion Hairdryer. It took me awhile to get to it, but the sound effect is fixed, and also one just like it in ch. 1 page 14.
I don't think there is a digital version. For people who don't know, Seven Seas published the first two volumes in the US, but for lack of sales, it's out of print.
but now i know that at last 3 people in the world likes Hakamada Mera's works: me, you and Mera
I wish all girlfriends could be that clear about whether sexual things are on the table yet, also this story makes me wish I had a cute horny teacher girlfriend just a bit.
Cannot express how much I love the older couple. I'm especially fond of Miyako, the cute and cool (and perverted) teacher. She and her girlfriend are sooooo cute together.
Reading stories about high school girls is great too, but an older couple like Miyako and Hiiro is so nice and refreshing~
