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Nicouriconimp%20140px
joined Sep 5, 2012

On another note, the censoring makes the clitoris look completely separate from the vulva for some reason

Thought I was the only one...

DUH, wasn't Maki forced to be a lil more like the weaker submissive one cuz that Hanayo CRIED when Maki went down there first?! O_o GEEZ, GO HARDER! >~<

joined Aug 12, 2015

I so happy reading this [mod deletion - you thought I was kidding?]. It so cute and i got nose bleed

花陽 は すごく かわいい

last edited at Aug 22, 2015 1:04PM

Anime-anime-boy-black-and-white-boy-favim.com-1570867
joined May 7, 2014

Haa...it always felt so peaceful when it comes to Sekihara's manga...

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

I think I like Sekihara's MakiPana more than her MakiNico. It feels a lot sweeter and she writes Hanayo really well. Not a big fan of her Nico. Based on this doujin and the RinPana one, I feel like whoever gets paired with Hanayo, they're guaranteed to get some hah.

Seolaposescolor2
joined Nov 9, 2014

I think I can ship Maki with anyone from muse at this point. We need a Maki harem. :p This was just the right amount of cute. ♡

Great
joined Dec 16, 2013

When ya see a pair tagged as NSFW and just get hella excited bc you know they gonna have the cutest sex ever. ; v ;

Also I just want to say that I really love how conscientious Sekihara is with some of these issues, like the "n-no that's dirty~ stop~" trope. Doujins always play it up as the receiver just being coy and actually wanting it, but, realistically, when someone says that, they probably actually want to stop because they're scared or it hurts and they don't want to be forced. So, kudos. I enjoy my porn a lot more when it's consensual.

last edited at Aug 26, 2015 10:48PM

Love.live!.600.1714062
joined Oct 24, 2014

77 Pag of gaynes
Fuck yeah

Noeek
joined Mar 17, 2015

I...Just... I Can't...

Rsz_mlg_yes__precure_5____by_candygirl4226-d8kc01n
joined Apr 22, 2015

Call me nitpicky but I find it a bit annoying seeing Hanayo was the only one fully naked while Maki had the bra on the entire time.

But aside that, I love this so much.

last edited at Jan 11, 2016 12:27AM

23519190_1784036034940610_3865802561690641399_n
joined Oct 4, 2016

Holy shit, this may be one of the healthiest, most functional portrayals of awkward first-time teenage sex on all of Dynasty. Like seriously, goddamn. My hat is off to this mangaka.

Frenchforfrontdoor
joined Oct 7, 2017

"I don't plan on telling her, but if she asked me, it might show on my face!"

All of my moe circuit breakers tripped at that point. Hanayo x Maki is such a unique dynamic and I love it.

joined Feb 1, 2013

Hanayo is my spirit animal and Maki is my waifu...I enjoyed this a lot :D

This... This quote. It really speaks to me. Considering she's one of nine characters, it's both expected and frustrating that sweet and kindly Hanayo is the one who seems to get overlooked the most, even though she's sooo cute!

Areyougonnatouchem-17sq
joined Jan 27, 2019

Yeah, the whole feel of... tentativeness, I guess, about the sex was really quite sweet. It does a good job at combining the first-time emotions of raw desire (must touch all the things! Lick until my tongue bleeds!) and fear (am I doing this wrong? Am I hurting her? Will she hate me if I'm not good enough?).

23519190_1784036034940610_3865802561690641399_n
joined Oct 4, 2016

Re-reading this for the first time in a few years, I realize that all of their sexytime is happening in Maki's bedroom while her mom is home.

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