I get the idea and I think the one-shot is beautiful. But the grandma story takes more part of the one-shot, and the point is to see Heisei era. Even if the idea of Heisei era girls looking at the past is a good final for the anthology. I would have preferred if they actually showed modern oppression instead of past one to say the present is better.
i felt like the modern couple's dynamic was a little weak tbh, and if they had more going on it would've sold it better. as-is it feels like their relationship is just all off screen
I agree. I definitely think that this could have been longer since it's balancing two couples: Miku and Ayase, and Kiyoko and Ryoko.
It might be just a coincidence, but Kiyo's name seems to be the same as Hana's younger sister in One Piece of Youth(although in this case, it's a nickname for Kiyoko). It's mentioned in One Piece of Youth that Kiyo got a letter from an older girl and is feeling troubled over it. If Ryoko's older than Kiyo, it could explain why she calls Kiyo casually with "Kiyo-chan," while Kiyo refers to her with the more formal "Ryoko-san."
Is it just me, or do the straps of Ayase's overalls hook up in both the front and the back, as you can see Ayase from behind on the last page?