Man, this kind of ending would have devastated me when I started reading yuri 2 or 3 years ago! But honestly, this ending was so random and shitty I don't even care anymore, I actually rolled my eye when I read she had died and was like "Mh ok whatever" xD
Guess I read too many bad endings/ het endings..
The story had lots of potential and I really like the author usually, but I can't help but feel she just wanted to finish the story and quickly get it over with..

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What a load of shit.

But then again it's not surprising, the author is known for being overall shit and pretentious.

This final chapter is such an incoherent mess it's not even funny. I WTFed at the whole pimp thing, rolled my eyes at her sudden offscreen death and outright facepalmed at the substitute sibling appearing years later.

What a complete train wreck.

This final chapter is such an incoherent mess it's not even funny. I WTFed at the whole pimp thing, rolled my eyes at her sudden offscreen death and outright facepalmed at the substitute sibling appearing years later.

What a complete train wreck.

Makes you feel alive, doesn't it?

This final chapter is such an incoherent mess it's not even funny. I WTFed at the whole pimp thing, rolled my eyes at her sudden offscreen death and outright facepalmed at the substitute sibling appearing years later.

What a complete train wreck.

You said everything I wanted to say perfectly.

I have a feeling that author just didn't know how to continue the story or had to finish it fast, so he/she just "aw fuk it, she flies away and die and main character is alone forever and then... aw yes, let's make 'after xxx years' useless scene to fill some space... OH AND LET'S MAKE HER A PIMP".

I presume the original plan was a much longer story. Everything that happens would totally work if it was happening spread across five chapters rather than one.

Except her being a pimp. That never would have worked.

last edited at May 24, 2015 6:59PM

And I'll say it again chapter 3.5 and chapter 5 are the same thing. If someone could tell a mod?

Sorry about the mix-up, I was told we were missing a chapter but I should've checked myself. Thanks for your assistance! (Hopefully we have everything right now)

For now we're going to go with a pseudo-doujinshi numbering (i.e. based on the original numbering but not totally accurate). This will be revisited when me and dpf have some more time to talk it over.

What a load of shit.

But then again it's not surprising, the author is known for being overall shit and pretentious.

The ending was kinda bad, but calling Amamo Shuninta shit is going too far.

What a load of shit.

But then again it's not surprising, the author is known for being overall shit and pretentious.

The ending was kinda bad, but calling Amamo Shuninta shit is going too far.

That I agree with,yes this story was not really good,but come on,she is still amazing..I'm sure she had a good reason or no time left or she wanted to troll us all

The ending. I dunno, it wasn't good and it wasn't bad, it wasn't happy and it wasn't sad. It just seemed kind of empty and devoid of emotion. I didn't really care when everything was revealed and that was a major weakness in the plot.

What a load of shit.

But then again it's not surprising, the author is known for being overall shit and pretentious.

The ending was kinda bad, but calling Amamo Shuninta shit is going too far.

That I agree with,yes this story was not really good,but come on,she is still amazing..I'm sure she had a good reason or no time left or she wanted to troll us all

Agreed. She's given us some great stuff over the years but she is not overall shit and pretentious.

What a load of shit.

But then again it's not surprising, the author is known for being overall shit and pretentious.

Woah, whoa, whooooooooooaaah. Too far man. Too far. Amano Shuninta is one of the yuri goddesses. BLASPHEMY AGAINST EVEN ONE OF THE GODDESSES ASSURES IMMEDIATE DEATH. ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)

Well, I didnt see that coming.

Well, I didnt see that coming.

Youu are nooooot alooooooooneeee

If it weren't for the whole thing about Tomo being a pimp, the abrupt end might even have worked. I can think a lot of different possibilities for "darken" Tomo's character without resorting to the underworld.

Moreover, in some way, I even expect the last pages (the "comeback" of Tomo). If it had been really her (like "hohoho! I had to fake my death but I'm back because, after all, I was only a damn tsundere who failed to be honest with herself" or something xD), the whole bit about her darkness would even have sense.

But ... um ... nope. As things just happen in the end don't fit for me. A pity, because there was no history of Shuninta disappointed me so far.

PS: I'll re-read me some of his other stories to get out of this bad taste.

last edited at May 24, 2015 7:52PM

If it weren't for the whole thing about Tomo being a pimp, the abrupt end might even have worked. I can think a lot of different possibilities for "darken" Tomo's character without resorting to the underworld.

Moreover, in some way, I even expect the last pages (the "comeback" of Tomo). If it had been really her (like "hohoho! I had to fake my death but I'm back because, after all, I was only a damn tsundere who failed to be honest with herself" or something xD), the whole bit about her darkness would even have sense.

But ... um ... nope. As things just happen in the end don't fit for me. A pity, because there was no history of Shuninta disappointed me so far.

PS: I'll re-read me some of his other stories to get out of this bad taste.

I agree with you!! specially on the black bar parts u_u
What will you read? I need something too, I re-read this to make some sense..it was even worse

^ sweet guilty love bites, with Miyata and kyrie. I love this one
Read Le petit chaperon rouge and it will make you forget everything too =D

last edited at May 24, 2015 8:10PM

I love amano but some of her messages are utter bs, how is throwing your whole life away to support anothers anything but unhealthy

Sorry about the mix-up, I was told we were missing a chapter but I should've checked myself. Thanks for your assistance! (Hopefully we have everything right now)

For now we're going to go with a pseudo-doujinshi numbering (i.e. based on the original numbering but not totally accurate). This will be revisited when me and dpf have some more time to talk it over.

It's good now, or at least I think. I wouldn't know if there are more chapters to this, but it doesn't seem like it. The continuity is preserved so yeah. Plus http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/philosophia_ch04#66 I don't know if that's all volumes but it probably shows all of them.

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I agree with you!! specially on the black bar parts u_u
What will you read? I need something too, I re-read this to make some sense..it was even worse

I'm not sure. Maybe "The Structural Formula of First Love", more probably and specifically "Backshot" to begin with. It has the right balance between mischief and tenderness I need in this moment.

^ sweet guilty love beat, with Miyata and kyrie. I love this one
Read Le petit chaperon rouge and it will make you forget everything too =D

Ohhhh yes SGLB is awesomeeeeeeee

Will go read those :3

I agree with you!! specially on the black bar parts u_u
What will you read? I need something too, I re-read this to make some sense..it was even worse

I'm not sure. Maybe "The Structural Formula of First Love", more probably and specifically "Backshot" to begin with. It has the right balance between mischief and tenderness I need in this moment.

Gonna just read all by her,except the feelings we all must endure, I liked it but it's not for now

I WTFed at the whole pimp thing, rolled my eyes at her sudden offscreen death and outright facepalmed at the substitute sibling appearing years later.

ikr, sounds like one of those crazy telenovelas

I think Amano is under some weed when she writes the endings of her manga. First the Feelings, now this... Someone should warn her about her mental health.

I agree with you!! specially on the black bar parts u_u
What will you read? I need something too, I re-read this to make some sense..it was even worse

I'm not sure. Maybe "The Structural Formula of First Love", more probably and specifically "Backshot" to begin with. It has the right balance between mischief and tenderness I need in this moment.

I'd recommend Drip or Sweet Exercise/Examination