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joined Feb 28, 2015


joined Oct 24, 2018

I don't like this oneshot as much as the prequel, probably because I don't understand what Midou is thinking and she feels more "human" in the prequel than this one. Miku is still interesting though.
Nonetheless, this is still a decent and enjoyable oneshot. Yorumo's art is gorgeous as usual.

joined Jan 15, 2022


joined May 27, 2015

The art is nice but the writing just sort of feels all over the place.

joined Feb 4, 2022

YAYYY THE SEQUEL!!! Thanks for working on delivering this chapter! Was definitely worth the wait haha

joined Aug 23, 2015


joined May 3, 2014

whatever people complain above, this was cute :3 and there is an 3rd

joined Aug 21, 2017

Not a bad sequel.

joined Oct 4, 2014

yassss bitch

joined May 10, 2021

Praise!! So glad one of the best one shots recently has a sequel

joined May 29, 2019

really good two shot, my style

joined Apr 4, 2017

refrain kiss is kind of a hot mess, but not really hot or messy enough. not enough commitment to justify expanding on cigarette kiss's ending and a big tonal shift without a lot of payout. also the pacing feels off.
the refrain kiss story beat concepts could work amazingly in theory but i just feel that they're impossible to implement in just one chapter and it shows.

still one of the better three shots on dynasty.

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