Cutee33

I don't like this oneshot as much as the prequel, probably because I don't understand what Midou is thinking and she feels more "human" in the prequel than this one. Miku is still interesting though.
Nonetheless, this is still a decent and enjoyable oneshot. Yorumo's art is gorgeous as usual.

Yay~

The art is nice but the writing just sort of feels all over the place.

YAYYY THE SEQUEL!!! Thanks for working on delivering this chapter! Was definitely worth the wait haha

gottem

whatever people complain above, this was cute :3 and there is an 3rd

Not a bad sequel.

yassss bitch

Praise!! So glad one of the best one shots recently has a sequel

really good two shot, my style

refrain kiss is kind of a hot mess, but not really hot or messy enough. not enough commitment to justify expanding on cigarette kiss's ending and a big tonal shift without a lot of payout. also the pacing feels off.
the refrain kiss story beat concepts could work amazingly in theory but i just feel that they're impossible to implement in just one chapter and it shows.

still one of the better three shots on dynasty.