It's cute, but man, some of that speech bubble placement is cursed.

It's cute, but man, some of that speech bubble placement is cursed.

At least the translation included numbers for some of the really bad ones. Looking at some of the artist's pixiv stuff I think text placement/planning is just a bit of a weak point for them.

Read left to right to left to right to up to right to left to left to right

It was alright, the art was good, but I felt it was meandering a bit? Going nowhere and everywhere at once, like they bring up getting married and then boom next page they're married, there was also lots of exposition, lots and lots of exposition.

This is cute but physically difficult to read. The artist doesn't seem to understand paneling or bubble placement

Oh heck, I just noticed this was a doujin. xD

Chapter 4 is missing pages 4-5 D:

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They're there now!

I'm just questioning why the Claudine x Maya tag isn't here-

I feel like this would be more successful if it weren't a Revue Starlight AU. Pretty much all the characters, especially Maya, are completely different from the source material. They might as well have been original characters.

I feel like this would be more successful if it weren't a Revue Starlight AU. Pretty much all the characters, especially Maya, are completely different from the source material. They might as well have been original characters.

Exactly what I was thinking. They are so out of character, they might as well be different characters.