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Img_0469
joined Sep 9, 2016

I guess I get why everyone in the comment section is unsatisfied with how everything ended. When you build a story around sex instead of adding sex in a story, it's not going to be that good or make much sense for that matter. They call themselves loving each other but it was really honestly only lust but still kinda cute nonetheless.

joined May 25, 2019

It's okay the ending is kinda wired. Maybe one more chapter would be good. The think with the sister was actually a sick plot move that could be huuuge and the think with the tear and the narrator also nice. The sudden sex was just not good.

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joined Aug 13, 2017

I just gave up mid chapter 2. I just can't with rape

Sshot-8
joined Oct 25, 2011

Ah, yes. I'd forgotten how stupid this was.

joined Sep 7, 2021

As far as porn plot goes, this was aight.

joined Jul 21, 2020

There should be more smut for the sake of smut in the yuriverse.
So, is it ended?

Img_3750
joined Feb 3, 2021

It was okay….way too much non consensual action for what’s supposed to be a romantic plot.

Bard_smol
joined Jun 12, 2021

Felt like what the stereotypical yaoi plot is like.

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