This was cute, thanks for the translation!

Stoked to see we're still getting Nanashiki's works on this site. Although it's overdue, the work is greatly appreciated.

Boobian. What a great word. I am also a boobian! :D thanks for the translation!

boobian

"Wow. This has got that late 90's early 00's style all over it. Weird to see it used for a modern doujin."

Looks at author

"Oh."

It's increasingly depressing to see Windyfall go down the toilet. The weird choice to leave most spoken noises untranslated and only translate a couple of them (pg 10/11) leaves me fairly convinced that someone just threw this into MTL and the MTL only caught the text it could easily parse. Missing words, missing punctuation, and the back-and-forth between english and japanese sound effects, sometimes on the same page, only cement this impression. (I hope they're not doing this after 7 years of scanning. I would love to be proven wrong.)

I actually took the time to write out a full set of proofreading notes because I figured it was the least I could do after being repeatedly critical of them, but it feels kind of pointless to bother posting it. I doubt anyone is paying attention if this is what they're putting out.

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I actually took the time to write out a full set of proofreading notes because I figured it was the least I could do after being repeatedly critical of them

If those are your feelings behind it, then you should post it regardless of whether it'll be read or not.

I personally highly doubt any MTL was involved, especially considering this is Dynasty, but you clearly paid a lot more attention to the minute details than me.

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