pg 10 "propoerly"?
I'll say that you have some kind of superpower or something. I mean, how can you spot that mistake? My eyes were blinded by all the sex happened in the doujin...
Don't worry, you're not the only one.
When I was reading this, my mouth was open and my throat was dry... I even licked my lips... sigh I need more of this... My heart's pounding like crazy and I need for it to slow down...
Still, that strip club. I'd want to go there!