^ My experience with cgdct shows is pretty positive, so the average is pretty high. Yuru Capm is definitely higher, but not by a landslide.
Although, the only reason I mentioned it is because this series gives me similar vibes (the ending especially).
Good use of sweat droplets. The spasm/shaking marks helps too. Now just add muscle tones like “aaaabs” to help convey involuntary muscle contractions during orgasm. This is a good work, carry on!
^^ it sort of looks that way, but... I think it's an intentional stylistic choice? It's probably not worth tagging it that way if it's not clear. (pun not intended)