Uh, Ok. I don't what was that.

I was just telling someone about this doujin like three days ago. Thanks so much for working on it..!

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I rather enjoyed the jokes in this one and that two-page spread of their showdown felt like an omage to Cowboy Bebop. Pretty good one.

IDK what the hell just happened but it was still funny either way lol

I like the story idea and the interactions, but there's some serious uncanny valley going on with the full body panels.

... Is it too much to ask that double pages be merged together? If it's an issue of them being too obvious in the imperfection of the merger, just add a white bar between them so that the drawn lines essentially match up. I've seen it done a lot in doujinshi (mostly of the hentai kind).

@Predaking: It's all a nightmare that Homura had experienced after being rendered unconscious from Sayaka cheating in their dodgeball match.

I don't know but this reminds me of JJBA

I kinda fail to see how this was Sayaka x Homura, I must be dense.