Good but the ordering of pages needs to be fixed. 10, 11, and 12 are in the middle and not the end.

Edit: Ordering is fixed now.

last edited at Feb 22, 2014 4:18AM

I suspect it's because the pages 0 through 9 don't have a 0 prefixed.

really nice, but as has been already said the pages order are mixed up XD thanks for the upload though o/

Kinda of confusing to follow. Then I read the comments here that the order is mixed up. XD

Yeahh I read the first four pages and then looked around to find a reason for why they didn make sense as well.

That call back xD

Whos been doing the uploads recently? Cuz this has been happening alot XD

I love these types of present.. but pages are a bit messed up..

Ruined for the order

I think the order of pages it's fine... I don't understand why you say it's messed up...

it's fine now, it's fixed - it was messed up

It's good, donno what to say anymore.?

Haha that last page! Just like the same thing happened to Akari xD

I lol'ed so hard at the last page, I just had a flashback of Akari right there XD

Somehow a lot of doujins place Himawari as the pervy one so I ended up really liking this one xD

I lol'ed so hard at the last page, I just had a flashback of Akari right there XD

Dang! You beat me to it.
That was totally a throwback to Akari!

Well, I'm glad I took the time to get to reading this one. Ordering doesn't kill the joy for me, but it does hamper it a bit.
Thanks for the work! :) Really appreciate it.

last edited at Feb 4, 2014 3:11AM

I always like this couple, not because how they are in offical anime, just because their doujinshi, always super cute.

last edited at Feb 4, 2014 6:55PM

Last page XD

Very funny xD Himawari sure knows how to enjoy a present, Sakurako also got a present if you know what i mean lol

THIS LAST PAGE LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

"to make love"

and then the last page
that slaps me on the knee