The dialogue was adorable, but the art... Ew.

Same could have being better if I don't see bone thin figures sigh

I like how chen has a very catlike body, and is a lot smaller than Ran as a result.

that's a weird spot to end.. yeah the art was kind of gross looking

Besides the twig arms, I thought it was a pretty cute story.

Yohane's bodies do tend to be a bit thin, but this seems to be a bit extreme, and her art seems kinda sloppy/rushed in this one.

With that aside, the story is pretty cute, I like Chen thing charge.

Meow.

Most of the time the clothes cover up a lot on the characters, Yohane usually draws their bodies really thin when they aren't covered. But it kinda feels like it was a bit... too much in this case lol

Yohane likes extremes, I think. Her thin characters are quite thin, and her heavier characters (Reimu for instance) tend to get pretty heavy. Marisa seems to be one of the exceptions.

But like I said, in this one I don't mind the thinness on Chen as it makes her look more animal I think.

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I'm fine with Chen's thin body, but Ran, err..

Yohane likes extremes, I think. Her thin characters are quite thin, and her heavier characters (Reimu for instance) tend to get pretty heavy. Marisa seems to be one of the exceptions.

But like I said, in this one I don't mind the thinness on Chen as it makes her look more animal I think.

So is confirmed that Yohane is a woman?

I'm pretty sure I've read this story before, Danbooru maybe?

Yohane likes extremes, I think. Her thin characters are quite thin, and her heavier characters (Reimu for instance) tend to get pretty heavy. Marisa seems to be one of the exceptions.

But like I said, in this one I don't mind the thinness on Chen as it makes her look more animal I think.

So is confirmed that Yohane is a woman?

I'm pretty sure I've read this story before, Danbooru maybe?

I seriously doubt Yohane is a woman, considering all of the futanari he used to do...

The dialogue was adorable, but the art... Ew.

Agreed.

Yohane likes extremes, I think. Her thin characters are quite thin, and her heavier characters (Reimu for instance) tend to get pretty heavy. Marisa seems to be one of the exceptions.

But like I said, in this one I don't mind the thinness on Chen as it makes her look more animal I think.

So is confirmed that Yohane is a woman?

I'm pretty sure I've read this story before, Danbooru maybe?

I seriously doubt Yohane is a woman, considering all of the futanari he used to do...

It is physically impossible for a woman to draw futa.

SCIENCE FACTS!

I'm fine with Chen's thin body, but Ran, err..

Usually Yohane draws Ran a bit chunkier (or fluffier if you prefer) than this. I wonder if this is an older piece, maybe?

I'm fine with Chen's thin body, but Ran, err..

Usually Yohane draws Ran a bit chunkier (or fluffier if you prefer) than this. I wonder if this is an older piece, maybe?

Going by the date on the danbooru post it seems is pretty old (and it shows, is very different to Yohane's current style)

The odd body type seems to be a concious decision on her part, she is perfectly able to draw normal and sexy girls when she wants

Case in point (NSFW):

http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=45375094

Oh and if Yohane truly is female, she's a pretty awesome one. Being a Senran Kagura fan? She has good taste.

:D

Very cute and I thought the abstract art added to the lightheartedness. Sort of like a day dream would feel.

I seriously doubt Yohane is a woman, considering all of the futanari he used to do...

This fact alone makes me want Yohane to be a woman tenfold ;]

Yohane likes extremes, I think. Her thin characters are quite thin, and her heavier characters (Reimu for instance) tend to get pretty heavy. Marisa seems to be one of the exceptions.

But like I said, in this one I don't mind the thinness on Chen as it makes her look more animal I think.

So is confirmed that Yohane is a woman?

I'm pretty sure I've read this story before, Danbooru maybe?

I seriously doubt Yohane is a woman, considering all of the futanari he used to do...

Fun bit of trivia. I'm a woman, and draw futanari, and know quite a few women who do as well.

(Case in point; the panda girl that is my user icon is futanari)

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Now I've gotta say the fact that it's untitled is really just to emphasize how it doesn't need any words to describe the scene just show it to the reader and they'd get it