So this is a slow start doujin and it seems like tokura is gonna be receiving more "lessons" from now on~

last edited at May 12, 2019 12:47PM

Not something that usually interests me much, but, whoa, that art is bad ...

the art might not be the best, but, uh... this panel is nice...

I don't really see the whole "bad art" argument (if it's about the shading on Kiyose's hair, that's on my part since I waifu'd it for easier typesetting).

I refuse to believe Eiko's first time would not be with Kiyose.

I refuse to believe Eiko's first time would not be with Kiyose.

There's nothing that contradicts it. They're just stating that night was Eiko's first time on top.

I mean yeah the art is pretty rigid but it's still nice enough for it to be enjoyable, personally for example I'd take this over Mira's art style. Just comes down to personal preference.

Careful of what you wish for

...

You just might get it

The art IS objectively a bit sucky lol.. BUT- I feel they nailed the characters spot on so it was still a nice read :)

Now, lets get something along these lines in the actual manga please!

last edited at May 13, 2019 10:17AM

I think the art's fine. Not the best i've seen, but not terrible, like from someone who's still learning. I really liked this story though. It was cute.