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Mostly%20sunny
joined Oct 26, 2016

This is not how you present your story, you don't start with a conflict and jump to another conflict that leads nowhere based in confusion and then shift the focus to a new character

That's basically what real life is like though.

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Dynasty_misc015
joined Nov 7, 2014

Sunnyskies posted:

That's basically what real life is like though.

Just because it's realistic doesn't mean it makes for a good story though. Being able to actually keep track of who's who is pretty vital and so far this story hasn't done much to make that feasible for most people. The jumping straight from one conflict to another doesn't help matters at all because it forces you to focus on what's happening as much as who it's happening to.

joined Oct 10, 2016

Hey, how about making hashtag #thai ?

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joined Oct 4, 2016

The author apparently has a pet elephant...

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Crystal3
Three Musqueerteers
joined Sep 25, 2013

Hey, how about making hashtag #thai ?

you mean tag?

Blackness
joined Jul 7, 2017

Isn't this a bit too much for Tomboy kinda thing? She really looks like a boy, I couldn't even think her as a girl.

joined Aug 22, 2016

Isn't this a bit too much for Tomboy kinda thing? She really looks like a boy, I couldn't even think her as a girl.

But... she is a girl. I don't like the term 'tomboy' as it implies the same thought in your post. That is "a girl can't be a girl unless she fits the stereotypes and expectations". But not to make that an issue of discussion at the moment specifically, here 'tomboy' fits her fine and to me she's very much a girl. She is shown to be female so there's no good reason to say she isn't.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

Its a little hard to keep track of whos who, but I'm still really enjoying this~

Ran-lossy
joined Mar 22, 2015

Isn't this a bit too much for Tomboy kinda thing? She really looks like a boy, I couldn't even think her as a girl.

But... she is a girl. I don't like the term 'tomboy' as it implies the same thought in your post. That is "a girl can't be a girl unless she fits the stereotypes and expectations". But not to make that an issue of discussion at the moment specifically, here 'tomboy' fits her fine and to me she's very much a girl. She is shown to be female so there's no good reason to say she isn't.

Girls tend to do less make-up and girly things at all girls schools from what I understand. Even the straight girls feel less pressure to do so with no boys present. Some will do it just because, but much less in general. So it seems quite accurate for all the girls do be doing their own thing.

Little Red Rum
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joined Mar 6, 2015

Hey, how about making hashtag #thai ?

I hardly see the point in making them since it feels like we have to diverse into Korean, Chinese, Taiwanese, etc tag too.

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joined Feb 18, 2015

The author apparently has a pet elephant...

lol what do you mean by that
actually I'm curious if she has a bird

joined May 19, 2016

Does anyone know if there are updates coming up?
It seems as if there are four new chapters since No. 2 (http://www.ookbeecomics.com/comics/3843/%E0%B9%83%E0%B8%99%E0%B8%AD%E0%B8%B8%E0%B9%89%E0%B8%87%E0%B8%A1%E0%B8%B7%E0%B8%AD%E0%B9%81%E0%B8%A1%E0%B8%A7 and https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.410263259175928.1073741839.218002218402034&type=3)
I tried to look up the translator but no luck so far. Would love to see a continuation of the series since I really like the setting and charakters.

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Crystal3
Three Musqueerteers
joined Sep 25, 2013

Does anyone know if there are updates coming up?
It seems as if there are four new chapters since No. 2 (http://www.ookbeecomics.com/comics/3843/%E0%B9%83%E0%B8%99%E0%B8%AD%E0%B8%B8%E0%B9%89%E0%B8%87%E0%B8%A1%E0%B8%B7%E0%B8%AD%E0%B9%81%E0%B8%A1%E0%B8%A7 and https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.410263259175928.1073741839.218002218402034&type=3)
I tried to look up the translator but no luck so far. Would love to see a continuation of the series since I really like the setting and charakters.

Degree wants to release Vol 1 next year and upload new version (book ver) in English after that. IF she will also find a translator for that

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joined Dec 28, 2016

This is one of my favourite series here. The pikachu bit was hilarious, and I thank you for the way you are. Keep going strong, can't wait to see the end of the series.

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joined Jul 6, 2020

Damn wish there was more

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