Nevrilicious Scans
joined Jun 5, 2015
that's a lot of complicated back story not much of the actual story for a doujin this short. author's probably new. he doesn't know how to pace himself.
Half of background informations was unnecessary. It could work for longer story, like 100 chapters longer, but not few chapters top doujin. After going through it once I always skip that exposition pages. Also no matter how important to the story, opening your chapter with wall of text is never a good idea.
Expect for that, I love this story, setting and characters <3 I'm waiting for continuation so bad.
last edited at Aug 1, 2015 9:03AM