You know what's not fair? Not having a followup story. That's not only unfair, but cruel and unusual. Didn't they ban capital punishment!? coughs awkwardly It's nice to see two opposite personalities actually conflicting with each other as opposed to working together, which seems to be the templete for yuri these days.
Obviously their friendship isn't over, so I would love to see what happens afterwards. I'd also like to see Nao get her act together and stop clinging onto the past like it's going somewhere (fun fact of the day: the past can't be changed, but people can). Growing up is a part of life. Either get on the train or get hit by it XD

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The best stories are ones that leave you wanting more.

..or so I've heard.
I personally like closure in my oneshots, but ones that leave you to your imagination aren't always bad.

There actually is a sequel IIRC.

Ohh, yeah the release post confirm there is a sequel :)

Yeah, this would've pissed me off if I didn't know there was a continuation coming up

God bless theres a sequel. This chapter made me feel eh. Chitose is such a lame character lol. I couldn't get into her or Nao.
Hope the second chapter is better.

Is the sequel gonna be one of those sequels where nothing happens?...
It's usually like that... lol

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Is the sequel gonna be one of those sequels where nothing happens?...
It's usually like that... lol

At least there is a sequel. Most of the time they don't have one which is even more frustrating.

Is the sequel gonna be one of those sequels where nothing happens?...
It's usually like that... lol

That's usually because the sequel was unplanned and things were tied up in the first part. This one feels like it was written as a two-parter, though

Growing up is a part of life.

Yes you do grow up but forcing it does not help either. There is no reason to change who you are just for the sake of being mature.

Growing up is a part of life.

Yes you do grow up but forcing it does not help either. There is no reason to change who you are just for the sake of being mature.

Change rarely happens because you want it. It's just something that happens to you as you grow older and experience all kinds of things throughout life, both positive and negative. And some people have no choice but to change themselves.

Obviously their friendship isn't over, so I would love to see what happens afterwards. I'd also like to see Nao get her act together and stop clinging onto the past like it's going somewhere (fun fact of the day: the past can't be changed, but people can). Growing up is a part of life. Either get on the train or get hit by it XD

You mean Chitose, not Nao, right? But yes, agreed. I had to remind myself that they're still in high school so it's not unusual to get hit by "the train".

(If she was past the first year of tertiary-level education and was still whining about how Nao isn't following her anymore [but, unbeknownst to her, is actually more equal to her], I would have stopped reading.) Bring on the sequel!!

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Growing up is a part of life.

Yes you do grow up but forcing it does not help either. There is no reason to change who you are just for the sake of being mature.

Change rarely happens because you want it. It's just something that happens to you as you grow older and experience all kinds of things throughout life, both positive and negative. And some people have no choice but to change themselves.

Oh there are plenty of people (teens) who just want to be "mature" and force it.

Growing up is a part of life.

Yes you do grow up but forcing it does not help either. There is no reason to change who you are just for the sake of being mature.

Change rarely happens because you want it. It's just something that happens to you as you grow older and experience all kinds of things throughout life, both positive and negative. And some people have no choice but to change themselves.

Oh there are plenty of people (teens) who just want to be "mature" and force it.

I agree with fipse, if people change when they don't want to then the change is pointless. change could be a conscious decision or it could be unconscious, but the important thing is that you don't force it.

and when you say "change rarely happens because you want it" I imagine you are talking about outside/uncontrollable factors, the change me and fipse are talking about is your reaction to those factors. you can control your reaction, and your reaction should be something you are comfortable with

you grow as a person when you look at a situation and say "hey, I was wrong" not when you look at a situation and say "hey, the world thinks I am wrong". the latter reasoning is stupid and harmful.

and when you say "change rarely happens because you want it" I imagine you are talking about outside/uncontrollable factors, the change me and fipse are talking about is your reaction to those factors. you can control your reaction, and your reaction should be something you are comfortable with

This a dangerous train of thought, if someone is comfortable in being a horrible human being, he should stay this way?
I guess some people are irredeemable.

you grow as a person when you look at a situation and say "hey, I was wrong" not when you look at a situation and say "hey, the world thinks I am wrong". the latter reasoning is stupid and harmful.

The second reasoning is not always bad, many discoveries and success stories were based on the fact this single person believed he was right when everyone thought he was wrong.

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The sequel better be good, that Chitose chick can't into angst

Yay for the sequel!!! :D

The ending wasn't that bad... but it definitely leaves me wanting more.

I would have been so sad if there weren't a sequel, lol. I'm a simple person and just want my happy ending (and if I can't get that, give me closure of some sort pls).

what!? noooo, I wanna see more >_<"

I just can't feel The yuri in this story at all for some Reason , Idk

There should've been more to the story :/.....................................................................................................................................I'm disappointed......................................

good thing there is a sequel (from what the posts here say), it's like we only got to see the cake and not eat it.

this is cute

Boooooo!

Boooooo!!!!!!

BOOOOOOO!!!!!!

I was going to add to my fav. but end is so stupid.

Def. a miss. Could have been far better but now it is only searching for its own place.