This was so good, the tension was built up nicely. I hope there's a second part where they both take the step!!

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Happy Bday Elichika <3 You are the best

Let me put it this way

I have a fever and the only cure is more Tamiflu

shit that ending was kinda sad

Very cute!

STOP THE BAITING NOZOMI! This reminds me way too much of straight girls baiting lesbians and then being all nah nvrmnd. STOP THE MADNESS NOW

STOP THE BAITING NOZOMI! This reminds me way too much of straight girls baiting lesbians and then being all nah nvrmnd. STOP THE MADNESS NOW

She isn't baiting, but trying to encourage Eli in taking that one step
That's just flirting yo, flirting with a dense Eli, but flirting still

If only the target wasn't dense as a brick.

Row, row
Flirt with the unflirtable

e: that sure sounded better in my head. Stupid prepositional verbs.

NozoEli relationship in a nut-shell:
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/colorful_shuffle#11

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You've just got to make a little poetic abuse:

Do the impossible
Flirt the unflirtable
Row Row
Get the girl!

NozoEli relationship in a nut-shell:
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/colorful_shuffle#11

I thought Nozomi directs Eli into sexual stuff, but Eli always takes initiative when they have sex xD Well, I don't mind if it's Nozodom though.

Hurm that's hawt

Bittersweet!

Man what the fuck

There's still a page missing from this that Yuri-ism never fixed.

I love thisssss

Yes!

God damn it Eri! You useless lesbian!

Lol! +1

Hahaha exactly my reactions

STOP THE BAITING NOZOMI! This reminds me way too much of straight girls baiting lesbians and then being all nah nvrmnd. STOP THE MADNESS NOW

She isn't baiting, but trying to encourage Eli in taking that one step
That's just flirting yo, flirting with a dense Eli, but flirting still

Yeah idk why I said that. I think jokingly. Probably was like 5 am when I wrote that so who knows. But yeah I clearly see it now hehe

Nice tension
yeah agree with the afterword

Y'know, I completely understand the comments about this being frustrating — but damn, girls being useless at each other is such my jam. I guess it's something about the tension.

That said, I kind of expect this Eli to wake up some time later and realize the true nature of their relationship, but possibly only after they've moved in together, gotten a joint bank account, and adopted three kids and a dog