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_20150710_023005
joined Dec 29, 2014

Hi guys! If you'd like to try this new comic you can read it at (http://ppauwee.tumblr.com/)

last edited at Jul 9, 2015 7:08AM

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joined Dec 16, 2013

yuri or not?

_20150710_023005
joined Dec 29, 2014

yuri or not?

It is! The artist indicated it in his blog.

Bondage%20fairies%20collection%20%20%20%232%20-%20page%204
joined Dec 16, 2013

i see a story about gay homophobes.

Thiaguinho-sama
Homu%20avatar
joined May 11, 2012

Gay homophobes are the best kind of homophobes...

last edited at Jul 8, 2015 7:51AM

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Crystal3
Three Musqueerteers
joined Sep 25, 2013

i hope strips will be longer (if they're going to be twice a month) xD

_20150710_023005
joined Dec 29, 2014

i hope strips will be longer (if they're going to be twice a month) xD

I hope all releases will be like FF hahaha

Alextasha Uploader
Crystal3
Three Musqueerteers
joined Sep 25, 2013

i hope strips will be longer (if they're going to be twice a month) xD

I hope all releases will be like FF hahaha

Nah... WDTFS is longer I think :D

_20150710_023005
joined Dec 29, 2014

i hope strips will be longer (if they're going to be twice a month) xD

I hope all releases will be like FF hahaha

Nah... WDTFS is longer I think :D

Ah yes I forgot about that. It is longer.

Guess this comic's timing is good considering FF is in hiatus but still... Twice a month with only few strips...

Z%20ss
joined Oct 15, 2013

i see a story about gay homophobes.

I read your comment and thought you messed up your english (?)... but you are... correct it seems, "Gay homophobes" LOL

_20150710_023005
joined Dec 29, 2014

Guys. Chapter 2 is already up. It's a shame we can't upload it here at Dynasty tho.

Roomfortwo
joined Feb 11, 2014

Meh, not much of a good start in my opinion. Art is meh, though it's no big deal as artists usually go better and a lot of webcomics had meh art at their beginning, but it reuses the same drawings a lot and overuse the "dialogs only" pannels too much. Half the art in this seems to be copy/paste of previous pannels with just a few modifications and it's not by being lazy like that that an artist will improve. :/

Nezchan Moderator
Meiling%20bun%20150px
joined Jun 28, 2012

Bit of advice for your artist. Draw in 3/4 view as much as possible. Straight-on and profile shots are a good way to make your work look flat and unappealing.

Also, as the wise Chantelune pointed out, use text-only panels very sparingly. They tend to be confusing to the reader, and adding names to word bubbles makes me feel like I'm reading a script instead of a comic. The flip side of what is that simple "talking heads" is boring, but fortunately there are loads of ways to avoid that.

OriginalGengar
Kira%202
joined Nov 29, 2014

First of, I really like the idea of a super homophobe girl figuring out that she's gay. Other than that I have pretty much the same problems with the comic that Nez and Chanteluni already told you.

I'M CURRENTLY WORKING ON A YURI COMIC ENTITLED "GAME OVER"

Titled or named, not entitled.

What do you use for drawing? Doesn't look like your using a drawing pad, I'm guessing you work with vectors? Anyways, I think the art does look a little bland, on a detail level. Some highlights and a few more shadows should help make the drawings less plain.

_20150710_023005
joined Dec 29, 2014

First of, I really like the idea of a super homophobe girl figuring out that she's gay. Other than that I have pretty much the same problems with the comic that Nez and Chanteluni already told you.

I'M CURRENTLY WORKING ON A YURI COMIC ENTITLED "GAME OVER"

Titled or named, not entitled.

What do you use for drawing? Doesn't look like your using a drawing pad, I'm guessing you work with vectors? Anyways, I think the art does look a little bland, on a detail level. Some highlights and a few more shadows should help make the drawings less plain.

he updated his blog. guess we just have to wait til he gets a graphics tablet? hahaha XD

Billportrait
joined Jan 17, 2014

yuri or not?

I told you guys, this fucking dude is our mvp, i love him

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