The boobs kinda bother me.
The character design is good, but the boobs are just "hentai boobs": oversized and too round. It feels out of place to me, if only because the story is kinda sweet.
But to each his own.
Thank god I wasn't the only one thinking that xD
All the more so because their "melons" appear to occupy a distortion in space, where they shrink precipitously when clothed (or expand when unclothed, take your pick). It's like the author selected body doubles for the H scenes.
What kind of noob virgins aren't aware of the fact that girl's boobs inflate to double their original size when they take off their clothes?
Anyway, this was a pretty cute story despite the fact it suffers from one shot syndrome where a relationship goes from zero to having sex in like 20 pages.
Tbh I find it kind of a shame. Like even the basket ball shot at the end was super sweet, but the 'bad' sex scene just kind of ruined the vibe. 'Bad' being because of pacing/character design/oversaturated scissor finish/whatever. I would've rather had the sex scene deleted and a few more pages development put in. Yeah it's a one shot, but it's such a shame of the good story build-up
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