Gorgeous and breathtaking. A true gem.

Lovely and haunting.

Beautiful and confusing

...huh? Who? What? Why?

Beautiful, and definitely made me think. But I can't help but think that for all of Eva's musical talent, she is a child stuck in arrogance and distance from others. No matter how beautifully her sister played in agony, it was only a matter of time before she either slipped and fell into the sea, or turned and walked away from the edge. She chose the latter.

Very beautifully eerie and haunting!

Beautiful, and definitely made me think. But I can't help but think that for all of Eva's musical talent, she is a child stuck in arrogance and distance from others. No matter how beautifully her sister played in agony, it was only a matter of time before she either slipped and fell into the sea, or turned and walked away from the edge. She chose the latter.

i definitely would have a bit more on events after the wedding

The dialogue was hard to follow, I couldn't tell who was speaking at times. Also, this seemed pretentious to me; it felt like the author was trying really hard to convince us that they've written something deep.