Thank you. Honestly I've no idea how you put all of that together. Between the translation problems, the poorly denoted flashbacks, and that one panel with the mon the boy, and a little girl, that looks like it might be a young version of the MC, all I got was a jumbled mess.

Eh, I wouldn't say it was that hard to understand even with the bad translation, but by now we also have the better translation at the end of the first page of this thread.

Well I never picked up that there was flashbacks, which was the major source of my confussion.

Funny to see how people comment on here, but i read this to for the end and i don't see nothing special. maybe it's just me and please don't mind me guys.

I'm glad the het mangas we get these days isn't a garbage story, it's been good. I hope it stays that way

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Well I never picked up that there was flashbacks, which was the major source of my confussion.

The use of different borders here instead of the more common black background around the panels may be a bit confusing if you haven't encountered it before, I guess.

A quick translation. I can't say it's perfect, but it's a lot closer from the original, imo:

thank you so so much <3

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Well I never picked up that there was flashbacks, which was the major source of my confussion.

The use of different borders here instead of the more common black background around the panels may be a bit confusing if you haven't encountered it before, I guess.

Na. I'm just unobservant idiot. I've got into trouble, a few times, with people in the comment section, because of making erroneous arguments, due to missing whole panels in a story.

I do like to thank you guys with taking the time to answering my questions. A lot of times they just get ingnored

Na. I'm just unobservant idiot. I've got into trouble, a few times, with people in the comment section, because of making erroneous arguments, due to missing whole panels in a story.

I do like to thank you guys with taking the time to answering my questions. A lot of times they just get ingnored

Noted, will keep this in mind if you have any questions in the future.

Well that translation hurt my brain.

Sal & Pal have made corrections, and the oneshot has been updated.

They'll be better in the future, as will we. Thanks.

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What, still stuck on What is Love? it's been like 3 years girlies

The translation that's up now is completely understandable.

By the way, the double-lined border in the flashback is supposed to differentiate the flashback.

awwwwwww

I just read the revised story. And I have to say, seeing the proper dialog in it's intended context made it much clearer than just reading it in the comment section. I still am a tinsy bit confused about the MC sneaking into the boy's room. Were they living together, for some reason, or was she breaking into his house. What's the deal? If they were living together that's Okay... I guess? But a college girl breaking into a house, to sneak into an elementary schooler's room is mondo bizarro.

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