Ah, this was a really enjoyable read. Art is great as well. It's always nice to see a little bit of Sakuya's hidden tenderness towards Meiling.

What a great story! Such wonderful art, great action scenes and comedy, and the winter outfits are lovely to see (I love it when artists change the outfits up a bit). Seeing Cirno get to be awesome for once is also a treat. I enjoyed this considerably

I'm gonna go ahead and suggest Meiling x Sakuya and Aya x Momiji for tags. Feel free to shoot me down mercilessly.

I suppose there's subtext for both, but the story seems to go out of its way to avoid mentioning any romance between either pairing. I'd personally say no.

I'm gonna go ahead and suggest Meiling x Sakuya and Aya x Momiji for tags. Feel free to shoot me down mercilessly.

I suppose there's subtext for both, but the story seems to go out of its way to avoid mentioning any romance between either pairing. I'd personally say no.

You need to be more merciless in your shooting-down.

Oh sure, let's see you be merciless after reading this story.

I'm gonna go ahead and suggest Meiling x Sakuya and Aya x Momiji for tags. Feel free to shoot me down mercilessly.

I suppose there's subtext for both, but the story seems to go out of its way to avoid mentioning any romance between either pairing. I'd personally say no.

You need to be more merciless in your shooting-down.

Oh sure, let's see you be merciless after reading this story.

Also, I should probably mention that I often do things like this after I get home from long work shifts, and I'm typically half-asleep and/or slightly buzzed. So, y'know, I miss a lot of details, and am quick to jump to conclusions.
Y'know.

Things like what? Shooting-down or critiquing people's shooting-down techniques?

Don't leave me hangin', I've gotta know!!

I'm gonna go ahead and suggest Meiling x Sakuya and Aya x Momiji for tags. Feel free to shoot me down mercilessly.

I suppose there's subtext for both, but the story seems to go out of its way to avoid mentioning any romance between either pairing. I'd personally say no.

You need to be more merciless in your shooting-down.

Oh sure, let's see you be merciless after reading this story.

Also, I should probably mention that I often do things like this after I get home from long work shifts, and I'm typically half-asleep and/or slightly buzzed. So, y'know, I miss a lot of details, and am quick to jump to conclusions.
Y'know.

Things like what? Shooting-down or critiquing people's shooting-down techniques?

Don't leave me hangin', I've gotta know!!

Things like everything. Ever.

Nah, I meant things like pairing suggestions. Like, "This story had Sakuya and Meiling getting along! It must ship them!" So, in other words, I'm admitting that this was all a bad idea.
...Then again, if I had good ideas, I wouldn't be Parnifia the Bastard, now would I?

Well, if your parents weren't married you'd be a Bastard regardless of your ideas...

Also, I'm pretty sure you know what I mean by "Bastard."

You killed Kenny?

Also, I'm pretty sure you know what I mean by "Bastard."

It takes a hand and a half to wield you in battle?

In light of recent tagging conventions, would it make sense to add those two tags? What does it mean when a work is tagged with pairings but not with the yuri tag? Particularly with subtext essentially removed from the tag toolkit.
(Seems it's more of a thematic thing without the yuri tag. This one could go either way for MeiSaku then.)

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Nezchan posted:

Also, I'm pretty sure you know what I mean by "Bastard."

It takes a hand and a half to wield you in battle?

Should probably at least take someone out to dinner first before doing that though, lol.

Perfect mix of gags and action.

huh...anyways mima!!

Very long and super good, perfect combination.