I thought it was the girl from that horror flick: “The Ring” giving her the tongue kiss. Or was it “The Grudge”? I forget, just as I will of these drawings.
Faces need work—rather plain. The rest of the drawing is alright... clouds and flowers and pulling attention away from their kiss. The sky needs some work... maybe some approaching, darkened clouds to indicate their time together is coming to a close and one decides to make a move on the other.