I understood this more after reading it a second time

I still dont really get it, but as long as they're not dying, its all good

I like the kind of stories that only show a small group of people together. It gives me a sense of warmth, and this was interesting. I do wish we saw more of the relationship instead of it just appearing at the end, but overall I liked it.

This story really makes me wish Kurogane Ken did some proper yuri romance stories. But he's a porn dude through and through, so that's what we get.

I suggest you to watch There final hours, it's pretty intense and bleak at the same time; but really nice.