I liked this - the exploration of backstory behind kancolle is interesting, and the relationship between the yet-to-be-renamed Akashi and Ooyodo was really nice. At first I even thought this was made before their actual names were revealed, haha.
Welp I don't get why they would willingly dispose of their humanity and go die in a battlefield when they have each other to love and protect... but ok.
Poor Akashi will just end up stuck wringing her hands and worrying about Ooyodo, since Akashi never has any reason to sortie. Yodo at least sometimes sets sail for anti-installation/sub purposes.
i often go back to this because its just such a nice and fulfilling life with girls loving each other... i hope to get somewhere close like this one day. one of my fav reads