pg 10, "That was no need for that!" should be "There was no need for that!"
pg 20, "We won't be able to be friend any more." should be "friends"
pg 25, "I don't have right" should be "I don't have a right"
pg 26, "haveing" should be "having"
pg 34, "I just can't seem take my eyes" should be "to take my eyes"
Umi's indecisiveness and inability to be honest with her feelings is causing problems for everyone again... but I must admit, that's what I love about her. If anything, it makes for a great story.
Damn, just date already..
Please tell me that there is continuation.
There is no balance with this pair. Sometimes it's too funny to take it serious or too angsty to believe it gets a good ending. But they are still one of my favorite pairings in love live fandom.
Well, it's called a doujinshi, or doujin for short. They're a subset of manga, which are self-published rather than through a publisher and often sold at public events. Many of them are fan works, with characters from existing series.