I used the Danbooru translation for this which was awful, so I had to change some of the sentences. My apologies if it's incorrect compared to the raw, but I did my best.

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Edit: damn, I made some typos. Fixes coming soon...

last edited at Jun 13, 2017 12:20AM

That's rather sad. I got vibes that Homura was borderline suicidal here and there. I really need to get around to watching Rebellion though.

That's bitter...sweet. More bitter. Sad. Damn it, Homura...

Norainhere posted:

That's rather sad. I got vibes that Homura was borderline suicidal here and there.

Spoilers from Rebellion: It basically verifies that she actually was in a way. It's not that she wanted to die though. She just wanted to see Madoka again and her mental state was not at all stable. She was questioning whether Madoka ever actually even existed.

I really need to get around to watching Rebellion though.

You should. It's actually really well done.

so that's how ppl thought what happened before the movie. ppl say that it was un-necessary and not good but i think it was great, personally, i like chaotic-neutral characters like Homura do something bad from everyone's perspective but still something good from theirs.

this is totally what i see happening just before the movie, pretty well done doujin, although i dont get that much romantic vibes to justify KyouHomu, i guess its fine considering as a one sided thing.

some errors

pg 13, "If you get that, the hurry up" should be "then hurry up"
pg 21, "The law of cycles gaves those ribbons" should be, "gave"

other than that, it is good.

some errors

pg 13, "If you get that, the hurry up" should be "then hurry up"
pg 21, "The law of cycles gaves those ribbons" should be, "gave"

other than that, it is good.

I've added it to my to-do, thank you. It's 1:30AM here though so it'll have to wait until tomorrow.

So a character caring for another is considered romantic? Wow you guys thirsty

I agree. The tag is really not necessary.

some errors

pg 13, "If you get that, the hurry up" should be "then hurry up"
pg 21, "The law of cycles gaves those ribbons" should be, "gave"

other than that, it is good.

I've added it to my to-do, thank you. It's 1:30AM here though so it'll have to wait until tomorrow.

errors fixed http://imgur.com/a/IKxil

I sent it already (it was the first thing I did) but thanks anyway.