"Somehow, the one's holding a four-leaf clover are the best" on page 7 is REALLY awkward wording. Maybe something like "I think the ones with the four-leaf clover design are best" would read more naturally.
"I was tyding this bookshelf" on page 12 should of course be "I was tidying this bookshelf".
On page 18, the phrase should be "bear with me".
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