I was thinking on this more, it's weird how the first half of this I think taints the whole work in a bad way, and the second half would be fine without that horrible start.
^ agree, needs some kind of tag
I submitted a suggestion for the "foiled rape attempt" tag, so we'll see if that's approved.
Thank you for that, I was happy to see the tag before reading it
Glad I could help.
Rikki has some problems...also was Raana under the covers at the end? I'm also not sure if this should get a "Foiled Rape Attempt" tag, or something adjacent, as that start was rough.
No, Raana just left in her usual manner.
That makes sense, thanks.
